钱晓强 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2013 Posts: 247 Location: 中国陕西铜川 钱晓强Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-04 06:32:34 Post subject: |
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梦中的水乡
你是否,已在悄然梳妆? _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 05:24:43 Post subject: |
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gnis wrote: |
春暖花开,
花影喃喃……
树梢惊鸿,
过客匆匆……
——乔桑 |
问好乔桑  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 05:26:18 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
白水 Moonlight wrote: |
(五)甦
梳落枝头的鸟鸣
花也喃喃
玉兰儿虽未搭腔却分明憋紫了脸颊
隔街光秃秃的电杆上
几只越冬的鸦雀藏一脸坏笑
待蛰伏的蚯蚓
腾龙起舞
你席地而坐
用乜斜的眼神睥睨人寰 。捎带着
瞟了一眼大千世界
突然发现林子大了什么样的鸟儿都会有
美与丑,烦恼与欢乐
无非心中一念
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白水,喜欢你这浓浓的诗性意味!——诗中意象生动、独特,还能说话!
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谢谢冰清老师的鼓励  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 05:27:44 Post subject: |
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问好老师,谢谢鼓励 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 05:29:06 Post subject: |
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你何时也回国看看,感觉有许多变化呢。问好 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 05:30:50 Post subject: |
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钱晓强 wrote: |
梦中的水乡
你是否,已在悄然梳妆? |
故土常在梦中。问好 |
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水弦 秀才

Joined: 26 Mar 2013 Posts: 293 Location: 中国辽宁灯塔 水弦Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 16:13:12 Post subject: |
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清新可爱 一片爱心 _________________ 诗意生存 |
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一品红 秀才

Joined: 13 Jun 2009 Posts: 330
一品红Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-06 17:45:50 Post subject: |
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弱柳拂水,花朵娇艳。美丽的春天。白白那里的冰该也化了吧。天鹅也不怕冷,四周的冰冰那么厚,它们游的好自在哪。  _________________ 中国山东,女诗人 |
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行天 童生
Joined: 03 Feb 2014 Posts: 41 Location: 中国贵州贵阳 行天Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-08 00:59:52 Post subject: |
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诗思有创意,诗意有创新,令人爱不释手的组诗。  _________________ 行云流水天下 |
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行天 童生
Joined: 03 Feb 2014 Posts: 41 Location: 中国贵州贵阳 行天Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-08 03:50:24 Post subject: |
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图文并茂相得益彰。  _________________ 行云流水天下 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-11 06:54:38 Post subject: |
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谢谢鼓励,问好周末 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-11 06:56:04 Post subject: |
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一品红 wrote: |
弱柳拂水,花朵娇艳。美丽的春天。白白那里的冰该也化了吧。天鹅也不怕冷,四周的冰冰那么厚,它们游的好自在哪。  |
等待春日花红  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-05-11 06:57:26 Post subject: |
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行天 wrote: |
诗思有创意,诗意有创新,令人爱不释手的组诗。  |
谢谢鼓励,问好周末 |
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