| 钱晓强 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-04 06:32:34    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 梦中的水乡 你是否,已在悄然梳妆?
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 05:24:43    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | gnis wrote: |  
	  | 春暖花开, 花影喃喃……
 树梢惊鸿,
 过客匆匆……
 
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 问好乔桑
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 05:26:18    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 冰清 wrote: |  
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	  | 白水 Moonlight wrote: |  
	  | (五)甦 
 梳落枝头的鸟鸣
 花也喃喃
 玉兰儿虽未搭腔却分明憋紫了脸颊
 隔街光秃秃的电杆上
 几只越冬的鸦雀藏一脸坏笑
 待蛰伏的蚯蚓
 腾龙起舞
 
 你席地而坐
 用乜斜的眼神睥睨人寰 。捎带着
 瞟了一眼大千世界
 突然发现林子大了什么样的鸟儿都会有
 美与丑,烦恼与欢乐
 无非心中一念
 
 
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 白水,喜欢你这浓浓的诗性意味!——诗中意象生动、独特,还能说话!
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 谢谢冰清老师的鼓励
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 05:27:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好老师,谢谢鼓励
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 05:29:06    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 你何时也回国看看,感觉有许多变化呢。问好
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 05:30:50    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 钱晓强 wrote: |  
	  | 梦中的水乡 你是否,已在悄然梳妆?
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 故土常在梦中。问好
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		| 水弦 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 16:13:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 清新可爱 一片爱心 _________________
 诗意生存
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		| 一品红 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-06 17:45:50    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 弱柳拂水,花朵娇艳。美丽的春天。白白那里的冰该也化了吧。天鹅也不怕冷,四周的冰冰那么厚,它们游的好自在哪。  _________________
 中国山东,女诗人
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		| 行天 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-08 00:59:52    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 诗思有创意,诗意有创新,令人爱不释手的组诗。  _________________
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		| 行天 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-08 03:50:24    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 图文并茂相得益彰。  _________________
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-11 06:54:38    Post subject: |   |  
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 谢谢鼓励,问好周末
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-11 06:56:04    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 一品红 wrote: |  
	  | 弱柳拂水,花朵娇艳。美丽的春天。白白那里的冰该也化了吧。天鹅也不怕冷,四周的冰冰那么厚,它们游的好自在哪。  |  
 等待春日花红
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2014-05-11 06:57:26    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 行天 wrote: |  
	  | 诗思有创意,诗意有创新,令人爱不释手的组诗。  |  
 谢谢鼓励,问好周末
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