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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 13:58:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好莹雪,白云闲人,悟兮轩居士, 喜欢你们的和诗.
不好意思, 最近电脑破天荒的给我找了一次大麻烦, 不能上网, 故未能及时给朋友们回帖 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 18:18:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

Never mind Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-11-27 07:01:25    Post subject: 谢 Reply with quote

有朋自远方来不亦乐乎,我极愿以诗交友。幸会。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-27 07:12:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

悟兮轩居士,"有朋自远方来不亦乐乎,我极愿以诗交友."
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相互交流,共同迈进,诗中岁月,逍遥人生!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-28 23:39:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

好唱和,顶一下
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PostPosted: 2008-11-29 04:26:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

悟兮轩居士 wrote:
有朋自远方来不亦乐乎,我极愿以诗交友。幸会。


希望读到你更多的诗歌, 问好.
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PostPosted: 2008-11-30 07:32:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水您好:
你上次给我贴上去的卜算子,我已经修改过一次了。你可以帮我把上次贴得改一改吗?谢谢您了。

卜算子, 咏莲

巍拔 2008

读 弹剑作歌之卜算子 莲,反其意而用之。

袅袅直中通,香袖清风舞,
世事营营爱牡丹,尔自嫣然处。

嫣亦不攀枝,不附王侯府,
雨过天青看素妆,笑靥含珠露。

巍拔
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PostPosted: 2008-12-01 15:17:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

《湖 邊》

蝶款香靄誰訴,檀板醉吟何處。
一笛牧曲路,柳舒雲盼影顧。
尋句,尋句,搖醒一湖詩緒。

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PostPosted: 2008-12-11 17:30:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

又一方天 wrote:
《湖 邊》

蝶款香靄誰訴,檀板醉吟何處。
一笛牧曲路,柳舒雲盼影顧。
尋句,尋句,搖醒一湖詩緒。


不好意思, 这么美的词漏读了. 谢谢. 很喜欢.
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PostPosted: 2008-12-11 17:39:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极,也来画一个:

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就


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发送时间: 2008年12月11日 22:24:06
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答和和平岛之 如梦令

千里飞诗情厚,
字字铿锵声透,
何日共宽余,
笔起如龙蛇走,
停手,
停手,
新雪正逢诗就。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 02:29:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

如梦令《古渡》

向 晚夕阳归 处
惊 散青烟红 雾
挚 手忆当年,无奈重逢南 浦 [“挚手”,恐是“执手”吧?]
留 步留 步
了断痴情难 诉
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向 往北美佳 处,
惊 诧如烟似 雾。
执 笔写词章,思念故国南 浦,
伫步,伫 步,
脉脉此情谁 诉?!
--------------------------冒昧续貂一首,贻笑大方了。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 16:22:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

好武功,俺只有感动了。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 21:10:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

改动几个字,再发一遍-------------


向 晚夕阳归 处
惊 散青烟红 雾
挚 手忆当年,无奈重逢南 浦 [“挚手”,“执手”?]
留 步留 步
了 断痴情难 诉
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向 往北美佳 处,
惊 诧如烟似 雾。
执 笔写词章,思念故国南 浦,
伫 步,伫 步,
了 却此情难 诉!
-------------冒昧续貂一首,贻笑大方了。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 06:51:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢穆平和诗. 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 07:16:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

如梦令<舞>

帘卷西楼残绪
回雪流风漫舞
折翅落飞蝶
击乐醉琴狂鼓
狐步, 狐步
旋断红尘雅趣
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 14:43:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极,也来画一个:

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就


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发件人: weiba chiu (synapseto@hotmail.com)
发送时间: 2008年12月11日 22:24:06
收件人: 白水 (baishui2004@hotmail.com)

答和和平岛之 如梦令

千里飞诗情厚,
字字铿锵声透,
何日共宽余,
笔起如龙蛇走,
停手,
停手,
新雪正逢诗就。


新雪正逢诗就

瑞雪兆年,期待先生创作丰收
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 17:44:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
如梦令<舞>
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奴不善和,幸有旧吟步韵,恭奉雅赏:)

收起闲情乱绪,领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟,还有管弦和鼓。
停步,停步,聊悟佛家禅趣。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 18:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
[quote="白水 Moonlight"]如梦令<舞>
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奴不善和,幸有旧吟步韵,恭奉雅赏:)

收起闲情乱绪,领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟,还有管弦和鼓。
停步,停步,聊悟佛家禅趣。[/QUOTE]欣赏MM好词,好久不见,问好MM Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 18:44:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="莹雪"]
征尘载袖 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
如梦令<舞>
...


奴不善和,幸有旧吟步韵,恭奉雅赏:)

收起闲情乱绪,领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟,还有管弦和鼓。
停步,停步,聊悟佛家禅趣。

欣赏MM好词,好久不见,问好MM Razz



莹雪MM,我比你大点儿:)

这首词不是我写的,至于谁写的,你问问庆宏哥哥:)
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 19:03:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
如梦令<舞>
...


奴不善和,幸有旧吟步韵,恭奉雅赏:)
...


谢过MM好词, 草和一首, 别笑

淡扫愁情惘绪, 轻袅烛红香舞.
祠庙木鱼声, 敲碎怨箫哀鼓.
莲步, 莲步, 素面向佛寻趣.
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