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如梦令《古渡》

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白水
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Posted: 2008-11-26 13:58:44 Post subject:

问好莹雪,白云闲人,悟兮轩居士, 喜欢你们的和诗. 不好意思, 最近电脑破天荒的给我找了一次大麻烦, 不能上网, 故未能及时给朋友们回帖

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Posted: 2008-11-26 18:18:50 Post subject:

Never mind

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Posted: 2008-11-27 07:01:25 Post subject: 谢

有朋自远方来不亦乐乎，我极愿以诗交友。幸会。

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Posted: 2008-11-27 07:12:33 Post subject:

悟兮轩居士,"有朋自远方来不亦乐乎，我极愿以诗交友." * * 相互交流,共同迈进,诗中岁月,逍遥人生! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2008-11-28 23:39:30 Post subject:

好唱和，顶一下 _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-29 04:26:46 Post subject:

悟兮轩居士 wrote:

有朋自远方来不亦乐乎，我极愿以诗交友。幸会。

希望读到你更多的诗歌, 问好.

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Posted: 2008-11-30 07:32:34 Post subject:

白水您好：你上次给我贴上去的卜算子，我已经修改过一次了。你可以帮我把上次贴得改一改吗？谢谢您了。卜算子，咏莲巍拔 2008 读弹剑作歌之卜算子莲，反其意而用之。袅袅直中通，香袖清风舞，世事营营爱牡丹，尔自嫣然处。嫣亦不攀枝，不附王侯府，雨过天青看素妆，笑靥含珠露。巍拔

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Posted: 2008-12-01 15:17:51 Post subject:

《湖邊》蝶款香靄誰訴，檀板醉吟何處。一笛牧曲路，柳舒雲盼影顧。尋句，尋句，搖醒一湖詩緒。 _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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Posted: 2008-12-11 17:30:59 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

《湖邊》

蝶款香靄誰訴，檀板醉吟何處。
一笛牧曲路，柳舒雲盼影顧。
尋句，尋句，搖醒一湖詩緒。

不好意思, 这么美的词漏读了. 谢谢. 很喜欢.

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Posted: 2008-12-11 17:39:56 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极，也来画一个：

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就

...

发件人： weiba chiu (synapseto@hotmail.com)
发送时间： 2008年12月11日 22:24:06
收件人：白水 (baishui2004@hotmail.com)

答和和平岛之如梦令

千里飞诗情厚，
字字铿锵声透，
何日共宽余，
笔起如龙蛇走，
停手，
停手，
新雪正逢诗就。

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Posted: 2008-12-12 02:29:09 Post subject:

如梦令《古渡》向晚夕阳归处惊散青烟红雾挚手忆当年，无奈重逢南浦 [“挚手”，恐是“执手”吧？] 留步留步了断痴情难诉 =============================== 向往北美佳处，惊诧如烟似雾。执笔写词章，思念故国南浦，伫步，伫步，脉脉此情谁诉？！ --------------------------冒昧续貂一首，贻笑大方了。

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Posted: 2008-12-12 16:22:33 Post subject:

好武功，俺只有感动了。

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Posted: 2008-12-12 21:10:55 Post subject:

改动几个字，再发一遍------------- 向晚夕阳归处惊散青烟红雾挚手忆当年，无奈重逢南浦 [“挚手”，“执手”？] 留步留步了断痴情难诉 =============================== 向往北美佳处，惊诧如烟似雾。执笔写词章，思念故国南浦，伫步，伫步，了却此情难诉！ -------------冒昧续貂一首，贻笑大方了。

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Posted: 2008-12-13 06:51:30 Post subject:

谢谢穆平和诗. 问好

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Posted: 2008-12-13 07:16:13 Post subject:

如梦令<舞> 帘卷西楼残绪回雪流风漫舞折翅落飞蝶击乐醉琴狂鼓狐步, 狐步旋断红尘雅趣

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Posted: 2008-12-13 14:43:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极，也来画一个：

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就

...

新雪正逢诗就

瑞雪兆年,期待先生创作丰收
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Posted: 2008-12-13 17:44:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令<舞>
...

奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）

收起闲情乱绪，领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟，还有管弦和鼓。
停步，停步，聊悟佛家禅趣。
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Posted: 2008-12-13 18:28:29 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]如梦令<舞>
...

奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）

收起闲情乱绪，领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟，还有管弦和鼓。
停步，停步，聊悟佛家禅趣。[/QUOTE]欣赏MM好词，好久不见，问好MM Razz

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Posted: 2008-12-13 18:44:07 Post subject:

[quote="莹雪"]

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令<舞>
...

奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）

收起闲情乱绪，领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟，还有管弦和鼓。
停步，停步，聊悟佛家禅趣。

欣赏MM好词，好久不见，问好MM Razz

莹雪MM，我比你大点儿：）

这首词不是我写的，至于谁写的，你问问庆宏哥哥：）
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Posted: 2008-12-13 19:03:25 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令<舞>
...

奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）
...

谢过MM好词, 草和一首, 别笑

淡扫愁情惘绪, 轻袅烛红香舞.
祠庙木鱼声, 敲碎怨箫哀鼓.
莲步, 莲步, 素面向佛寻趣.

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