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白水
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Posted: 2007-12-09 11:50:18 Post subject: 楚河*汉界

楚河*汉界 <摆渡> 宁愿作一颗过河的卒子死, 也死在横冲直撞的矩阵里可你却偏偏遇到艄公从此, 你的生命便系于一条动荡不安的河 <丢> 丢車是为了保帅为了保帅眼不眨手儿不颤丢丢马丢炮丢小卒只丢得剩一座空空的城池帅谁? 索性一起丢了出去 <换> 马走日, 象走田炮打隔山? 我用牛换象挪开山省得障眼布局终于合理了你说不好玩

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Posted: 2007-12-09 12:47:25 Post subject:

以为是你写给偶的那首打油, 就进来了.. 原来不是, 是首更好的..

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Posted: 2007-12-09 12:56:52 Post subject:

。让我想起，王菲的棋子　：） _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-12-09 15:04:29 Post subject:

寓意很深呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-09 19:43:30 Post subject:

楚天舒 wrote:

以为是你写给偶的那首打油, 就进来了. Very Happy

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原来不是, 是首更好的.. Very Happy

好吗? 谢谢, 就喜欢听鼓励. 有点小创新写法, 正怕大家砸我呢 Razz

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Posted: 2007-12-09 19:44:49 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

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让我想起，王菲的棋子　：）

问好KOK. 只是我喜欢音乐, 很少听流行歌, 没听过 Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-12-09 19:53:24 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

寓意很深呀

写着好玩. 我下棋就是横冲直撞, 常常人家让我三个车,马,炮还是输. 索性把帅也扔出去投降了事. Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-09 20:16:40 Post subject:

白水灵气，喜欢！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-09 22:42:45 Post subject:

呵呵，不会下棋~好象有个论坛马上要搞个节目也是下棋,看看他们怎么搞,我们也可以搞个~ 不是真的下棋,还是一个写诗的活动!

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Posted: 2007-12-09 23:23:02 Post subject:

生活中常常要下棋，只是下棋的和看棋的都要平心静气，才好。下棋不是战争，下棋不是下气，只有好朋友才对弈，否则甭玩。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-09 23:46:31 Post subject:

为"诗"这个字..................默哀 _________________ 我是一片沉睡的海渴望苏醒的日子不会到来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1259454194

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Posted: 2007-12-10 06:28:13 Post subject:

呵呵，白水还没败。有人为白水默哀了。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-12-10 06:47:18 Post subject:

新颖. _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

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Posted: 2007-12-10 17:54:15 Post subject:

写的空灵内涵也不错喜欢的作品莞君问好您学习了 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:55:51 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

白水灵气，喜欢！

冰清老师, 谢谢.

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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:58:20 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

呵呵，不会下棋~好象有个论坛马上要搞个节目也是下棋,看看他们怎么搞,我们也可以搞个~
不是真的下棋,还是一个写诗的活动! Very Happy

好啊, 你搞吧.到时候一定凑趣, 别再把我的佳作笑黄了 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:02:15 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

生活中常常要下棋，只是下棋的和看棋的都要平心静气，才好。下棋不是战争，下棋不是下气，只有好朋友才对弈，否则甭玩。

说的好. 中国相棋蕴涵着深奥的哲理 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:03:28 Post subject:

贝多芬 wrote:

为"诗"这个字..................默哀

伤城 wrote:

呵呵，白水还没败。有人为白水默哀了。

谢谢两位朋友, 别担心. 白水偶尔溜之大吉, 只要我们保持心的宁静, 莫为世俗名利所动, 诗歌将会永存. Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:17:10 Post subject:

游旋1 wrote:

新颖.

谢谢鼓励. 问好

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:18:27 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

写的空灵内涵也不错喜欢的作品莞君问好您学习了

更喜欢你的诗歌, 希望多读到一些. 问好.

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