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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 11:50:18    Post subject: 楚河*汉界 Reply with quote

楚河*汉界

<摆渡>

宁愿作一颗过河的卒子
死, 也死在横冲直撞的矩阵里
可你却偏偏遇到艄公
从此, 你的生命
便系于一条动荡不安的河

<丢>

丢車
是为了保帅
为了保帅 眼不眨
手儿不颤

丢马 丢炮
丢小卒
只丢得剩一座空空的城池
帅 谁?
索性一起丢了
出去

<换>

马走日, 象走田
炮打隔山?
我用牛换象
挪开山 省得障眼

布局终于合理了
你说
不好玩

Very Happy Very Happy
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楚天舒
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 12:47:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

以为是你写给偶的那首打油, 就进来了.Very Happy.
原来不是, 是首更好的..Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 12:56:52    Post subject: Reply with quote



让我想起,王菲的棋子 :)
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 15:04:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

寓意很深呀
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 19:43:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

楚天舒 wrote:
以为是你写给偶的那首打油, 就进来了.Very Happy.
原来不是, 是首更好的..Very Happy


好吗? 谢谢, 就喜欢听鼓励. 有点小创新写法, 正怕大家砸我呢 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 19:44:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:


让我想起,王菲的棋子 :)


问好KOK. 只是我喜欢音乐, 很少听流行歌, 没听过 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 19:53:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
寓意很深呀


写着好玩. 我下棋就是横冲直撞, 常常人家让我三个车,马,炮还是输. 索性把帅也扔出去投降了事. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 20:16:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水灵气,喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 22:42:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,不会下棋~好象有个论坛马上要搞个节目也是下棋,看看他们怎么搞,我们也可以搞个~
不是真的下棋,还是一个写诗的活动! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 23:23:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy 生活中常常要下棋,只是下棋的和看棋的都要平心静气,才好。下棋不是战争,下棋不是下气,只有好朋友才对弈,否则甭玩。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 23:46:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

为"诗"这个字..................默哀
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 06:28:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,白水还没败。有人为白水默哀了。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 06:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

新颖.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 17:54:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的空灵 内涵也不错 喜欢的作品 莞君问好您 学习了
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 08:55:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
白水灵气,喜欢!


冰清老师, 谢谢. Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 08:58:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
呵呵,不会下棋~好象有个论坛马上要搞个节目也是下棋,看看他们怎么搞,我们也可以搞个~
不是真的下棋,还是一个写诗的活动! Very Happy


好啊, 你搞吧.到时候一定凑趣, 别再把我的佳作笑黄了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:02:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy 生活中常常要下棋,只是下棋的和看棋的都要平心静气,才好。下棋不是战争,下棋不是下气,只有好朋友才对弈,否则甭玩。


说的好. 中国相棋蕴涵着深奥的哲理 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:03:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

贝多芬 wrote:
为"诗"这个字..................默哀


伤城 wrote:
呵呵,白水还没败。有人为白水默哀了。


谢谢两位朋友, 别担心. 白水偶尔溜之大吉, 只要我们保持心的宁静, 莫为世俗名利所动, 诗歌将会永存. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

游旋1 wrote:
新颖.


谢谢鼓励. 问好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:18:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
写的空灵 内涵也不错 喜欢的作品 莞君问好您 学习了


更喜欢你的诗歌, 希望多读到一些. 问好.
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