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黑天鹅
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 05:49:12    Post subject: 黑天鹅 Reply with quote



黑天鹅

波光流荡的舞台上
从古典悲剧中走出的
一位雍容华贵
穿黑礼服的皇后

所有的眼睛
(着魔的男人们
既羡且妒的女人们)
都紧紧盯着她
那黑得发亮
不戴首饰却优美无比的脖子

当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截
而豁然明亮
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 07:26:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

不戴首饰却优美无比的脖子

非马老师, 喜欢这天然去修饰的感觉, 如同清纯,自然的诗歌. 祝老师新年快乐.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 08:42:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截
而豁然明亮

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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 17:59:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习问候您!新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-06 18:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

前两节弯弓蓄势,后一节一箭中的
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 01:27:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截
而豁然明亮
——再次问候非马先生。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 05:38:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢诸位. 愿大家都有个明亮愉快的新年.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 05:55:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

闲适优雅的豁朗~问好非马老师,新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 23:02:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截
而豁然明亮

还真没见过黑天鹅。。。问好
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PostPosted: 2009-01-08 03:11:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
闲适优雅的豁朗~问好非马老师,新年快乐!

问半溪明月新年好!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-08 17:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截
而豁然明亮

结尾很突然,有出乎意料的美!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-08 19:13:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

俞伟远 wrote:
当她轻轻把弧形的脖子向前伸——直——
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你好!你的经历似乎正是我所预期的,也是我一向的信念:在物质生活水平达到某个程度以后,人们会回过头来追求精神生活的满足。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 00:32:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

优雅尽出。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 05:12:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

来学习了!
向非马老师问好,您新年快乐啊!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 18:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

“整个世界仿佛也被拉长了一大截 ”有力的想象把全篇诗歌提到亮点。学习了——
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 19:42:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

陈若祥 wrote:
来学习了!
向非马老师问好,您新年快乐啊!

谢谢!也祝你新年快乐!
也问nobody,孙慧峰,爱月诸位朋友们好.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 05:47:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑的明亮
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