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送鼠迎牛

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Posted: 2009-01-11 12:32:08 Post subject: 送鼠迎牛

送旧岁鼠遁地远去迎新年牛冲天近来送鼠迎牛

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Posted: 2009-01-11 15:56:15 Post subject:

真牛

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Posted: 2009-01-11 18:31:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

真牛

希望新的一年大家都牛起来！ Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-11 21:47:48 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

送旧岁鼠遁地远去
迎新年牛冲天近来

送鼠迎牛

既然上联全仄，下联为什么不全平，而且“近”明显有碍于规则硬塞进来的痕迹，不如改成“长”，嘻嘻``
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Posted: 2009-01-12 08:05:17 Post subject:

有点意思。谢谢！

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