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春联一副

晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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晓松Collection

Posted: 2009-01-11 09:32:13 Post subject: 春联一副

响应秋叶的倡议, 也献上一副春联, 为节日增加点气氛, 也是一种美好祝愿! 坎坎坷坷山重水复送鼠年离去欢欢喜喜柳暗花明期牛市到来横批: 危机生机

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2009-01-11 12:30:32 Post subject:

晓松好联！我也凑一联：送旧岁鼠遁地远去迎新年牛冲天近来送鼠迎牛

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2009-01-11 15:59:14 Post subject:

危机生机喜欢这横批. 我们的英文课本还引用了危机二字. 解释是有危就有机.

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection

Posted: 2009-01-11 21:25:48 Post subject:

晓松联善化用,"山重水复"喻去年不平常的一年."柳暗花明"喻今年将有新的生机庆宏联词语搭配恰切."鼠遁地"牛冲天"各尽其态. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

海南丢
秀才

Joined: 25 Jul 2007
Posts: 152
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
海南丢Collection

Posted: 2009-01-11 21:38:54 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

响应秋叶的倡议, 也献上一副春联, 为节日增加点气氛, 也是一种美好祝愿!

坎坎坷坷山重水复送鼠年离去
欢欢喜喜柳暗花明期牛市到来

横批: 危机生机

晓松先生，这个横批有些绕，不如使用民间俗语“抬头见喜”来的痛快，嘻嘻``
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秋叶
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Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769

秋叶Collection

Posted: 2009-01-12 14:21:53 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

响应秋叶的倡议, 也献上一副春联, 为节日增加点气氛, 也是一种美好祝愿!

坎坎坷坷山重水复送鼠年离去
欢欢喜喜柳暗花明期牛市到来

横批: 危机生机

坎坎坷坷山重水复送鼠年离去
欢欢喜喜柳暗花明期牛市到来

好联，谢谢晓松和应，建议前4字的意群后隔开一下，这样读起来就不用喘气了 Laughing

野航
秀才

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection

Posted: 2009-01-12 16:25:11 Post subject:

该把它贴到BAYSTREET _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

晓松
举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192

晓松Collection

Posted: 2009-01-13 14:20:29 Post subject:

多谢qinghongh, 白水 Moonlight, 黄洋界, 海南丢, 秋叶, 野航各位作和,关注及建议!

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2009-01-15 10:31:09 Post subject:

玲玲珑珑，剔剔透透。晓斑的楹联和诗歌一样。

穆平
秀才

Joined: 08 Sep 2008
Posts: 572
Location: 中国天津
穆平Collection

Posted: 2009-01-16 00:55:39 Post subject:

也来凑个趣------- 坎坎坷坷山重水复送鼠年离去欢欢喜喜柳暗花明期牛市到来 ===================== 三灾八难惊魂动魄斥恶鼠窜去一波三折戮力同心迎金牛归来

海南丢
秀才

Joined: 25 Jul 2007
Posts: 152
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
海南丢Collection

Posted: 2009-01-16 03:05:57 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

好联，谢谢晓松和应，建议前4字的意群后隔开一下，这样读起来就不用喘气了 Laughing

秋叶先生真好玩儿，你怎么隔开读起来都是要喘气的，只是你这样隔开读起来就不会倒吃气儿了，嘻嘻``
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王君明
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Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
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Posted: 2009-01-16 05:17:38 Post subject:

拜望晓松兄，问候诸位先生：） _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

南之北
童生

Joined: 02 Dec 2008
Posts: 81
Location: 大陆
南之北Collection

Posted: 2009-01-16 14:04:54 Post subject:

不擅对联，但也来凑个热闹。楼主此联是好联，但总觉得横批有点不大好，似可再酌？呵呵，说错莫怪哟…… _________________ 我的诗词吾爱网个人主页：http://www.52shici.com/space.php?mem_id=6419

晓松
举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192

晓松Collection

Posted: 2009-01-16 19:38:21 Post subject:

谢冰清、穆平、海南丢、王君明、南之北对我的关注和鼓励！南之北提的中肯，我自己也觉得横批不大好，虽然想来点新意，但又过于直和白，一时又想不出更合适的来。

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