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睡 美 人
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PostPosted: 2009-01-04 20:17:06    Post subject: 睡 美 人 Reply with quote














象一个美人
你睡在湖的那边
欣赏着色彩斑斓的繁花
镶嵌在绿油油的麦田
画家的彩笔
难以勾勒出你还未全醒的冬眠
诗人的巧思
无法完善赞美你的诗篇
仲夏的高温
也只能让你稍稍地移去了你的披肩
你那白色的头盖
依然害羞地遮到你的发沿
金秋的果实
你从不轻易地垂唌
火红的枫叶
勉强才感动得你也相思绵绵
当北风刮过原野
寒冰把满湖的心思阻断
那雪白的长袍
又一次盖住了你藏而不露的真颜
傍晚的霞光
照亮了紧紧围绕你的云烟
夜色降临的时候
无边的黑夜忙着编织美丽的梦幻
于是,你就象那天上的神仙
诱惑着我
一年又一年
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悠子
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PostPosted: 2009-01-05 07:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

很诱惑
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-01-05 08:49:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

好山好水。
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曲元奇
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PostPosted: 2009-01-05 20:09:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

奇妙的构思 流畅的节奏 充满感情的语言 读来陶然神醉
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 19:16:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
很诱惑


这也许就是美的力量~~
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 19:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
好山好水。


缺好人:)
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 19:28:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

曲元奇 wrote:
奇妙的构思 流畅的节奏 充满感情的语言 读来陶然神醉


谢谢曲兄力捧!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 20:34:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

巧思
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而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。
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