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原创诗歌:你是我的仇人
或云或马:贺铭
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 09:41:32    Post subject: 原创诗歌:你是我的仇人 Reply with quote

你是我的仇人
或云或马
你是我不共戴天的仇人
我千辛万苦地追寻你
就是为了败于你的刀下
偿还我前生欠你的债
等你砍下我的头颅
用我的头骨做杯
你这狠心的女魔头

我的头骨装满毒药
被你整日地捧在手里
与你亲吻
你这温柔的女强盗

等你死了 我们合葬
继续做一对冤家
生两个孩子
一个叫珠牟朗玛
一个叫纳木错


你这美丽的女妖精
初稿于2005.12.25
成于2007.2.16

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一只乱风中的风筝
努力保持着平衡
他胆怯 他脆弱 他想摆脱
于是他不停地向上 可是
上面还是风
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 09:59:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的头骨装满毒药
被你整日地捧在手里
与你亲吻
你这温柔的女强盗

这节最有意思
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或云或马:贺铭
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 21:26:14    Post subject: 大恨即大爱 Reply with quote

谢谢和平岛。
有大爱才有大恨,许多时候,大恨即大爱,爱情更是如此。
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一只乱风中的风筝
努力保持着平衡
他胆怯 他脆弱 他想摆脱
于是他不停地向上 可是
上面还是风
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 21:46:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

大恨即大爱

有道理呀

你的名字也很有意思:或云或马


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