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春雨
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Location: 中国吉林
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 10:34:38    Post subject: 画皮 Reply with quote

画 皮
腊月十五的月光
把你的诺言照得异常的苍白
寻找诺言的脚步在天空奔跑
我能找得出你在哪寻欢作乐
却不愿再去观看
你的脸上今晚究竟还有没有血色
最简单的愿望让你抛弃最真挚的情感
情感原本就是让理智睡眠的药片
想象你呼吸的变奏之后
才知道是自己浇灌了痛苦的知觉
人和鬼的距离
原来就是被组合的文字出口后
是否能够真实
因月光的明亮而变得空旷的房屋前面
有几根在空中感受清霜的枯枝
2009-1-10 3:52
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PostPosted: 2009-01-09 16:13:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好
气氛可以营造得更诡秘些
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