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冬至三九（一组）

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-01-05 00:48:52 Post subject: 冬至三九（一组）

冬至三九（一组） 1、零下10度还没有雪北方人都咔咔的咬牙骂雪还不下我儿子还在北方以北在长春上大学那儿零下25度那儿雪花飘飘儿子说吉林人也咬牙咔咔咔他们骂雪不够大 2 天很冷我一个哥们突然挥起了拳头他放下拳头的时候猛觉得心室漏风 3 一个体育老师出了车祸再上课的时候所有的学生都不敢跑他们感觉鞋子粘湿湿的耳朵听到扑哧扑哧的响动感觉自己马上要滑倒 4 加沙有点冷是加沙人自己的感觉他们的楼破了他们的水管裂了他们挖掘机不够用他们的止血钳还等待进口他们眼睁睁的瞧着以色列蓝汪汪的炮口感觉是一眼抽不干的水井 5 大猫小猫男猫女猫一群猫找不到鼠肉它们集体窥视一个垃圾池后来它们热情于祷告下定决心做一个素食主义者 6 广州火车站北开的列车加班加点回家的农民工带上出门时亲人缝制的被褥他们懂农历知道今年春节不到立春 2009-1-5 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

刘浪
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Joined: 04 Dec 2008
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Posted: 2009-01-05 01:42:55 Post subject:

很喜欢的一组。问好。新年快乐。 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Posts: 722

子花Collection

Posted: 2009-01-05 15:25:52 Post subject:

提上，新年好浪兄！！

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
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Posted: 2009-01-05 15:35:32 Post subject:

问好刘浪和子花。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2009-01-05 16:09:26 Post subject:

以色列蓝汪汪的炮口感觉是一眼抽不干的水井

海烟
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Joined: 05 Jan 2009
Posts: 6

海烟Collection

Posted: 2009-01-05 23:16:58 Post subject:

自由/朴实的抒写，欣赏，问好 _________________ 海烟，又名海之烟，重庆市作协会员　作品先后在《诗选刊》《绿风》《当代小说》《中国文艺》《西北军事文学》等刊物发表海烟博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/luoxiaoling123

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
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杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2009-01-08 03:07:50 Post subject:

问好白水和海烟。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

戴永良
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Joined: 28 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2009-01-09 15:21:09 Post subject:

回家的农民工带上出门时亲人缝制的被褥他们懂农历知道今年春节不到立春 --------------祝新年快乐！ _________________ 真诚友爱善良

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2009-01-09 16:32:46 Post subject:

学习——忽北忽南忽东忽西，也是一组；欣赏——诗性的口语述说语言，通俗而美。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

孙慧峰
童生

Joined: 09 Oct 2006
Posts: 97

孙慧峰Collection

Posted: 2009-01-10 00:31:33 Post subject:

最喜欢第一节。

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2009-01-10 03:24:34 Post subject:

他们懂农历知道今年春节不到立春有蕴涵~学习，问好狼哥！

cyansharp
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Joined: 26 May 2008
Posts: 61

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Posted: 2009-01-10 04:40:34 Post subject:

儿子说吉林人也咬牙咔咔咔他们骂雪不够大 --------------------------- 真好，喜欢。问候冲浪君！

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