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《招聘会》外两首
望银河
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PostPosted: 2009-01-01 17:33:09    Post subject: 《招聘会》外两首 Reply with quote

要试着相信那些贪官的清白
假设没人去查
假设蒙住眼睛
罪证也就不曾存在过

类似一段莫须有的爱情
类似学校的一封推荐信
类似几千元一张的学历证书
贴上各种各样的标签
我们时刻贱卖自己

面试前一秒,你还会庆幸自己的提早世故
当一种声音响起时
你有工作经验吗
你是研究生学历吗
你是本地户口吗
好,我们暂时不需要你
而你能说什么
不是人,真不是人
你答对了
它叫现象

《红绿灯》
在没进入误区之前,我们有一万个理由讲堂堂的话
一些犯错人的尾巴抓在手里,我们紧咬不放
动用报纸,媒体,博客等高杀伤性武器
把十几年,甚至是几百年的经验装进嘴巴
远程轰炸。持续的快感传达至脑皮层
进一步鞭尸,震慑未知的敌人
为自己将遇到的错误铺平道路

实质上,我们频繁使用过红灯
抨击典型的事,处理典型的人
而绿灯则是最好的私人保镖
你可以安心地享受高潮

可矛头一旦调转
你会发现身体上的洞,巨大的暗影
更像是残旧的城墙与篱笆
一些被封杀的声音犹如决堤的洪水
从你极力遮掩的部位,那块羞处
喷涌而出

《邪恶的苹果》
丑八怪,说这话时他们瘪着脸蹲在半空
而我刚刚经历一场落差
起初我们在同一棵树上,一个颜色
沐浴阳光,以鸟为邻
油腻的日子从树身汩汩流出

一群预备南飞的雁打破格局,季节
被它们偷偷掉包,知了的证词遭遇封杀
经验之外的真实,我被未知的时间与空间劫持
我与他们的距离从那时开始
一点点,一寸寸,一米米
最终变成地面与枝头的尴尬

一只想飞的苹果,背叛一棵树的承诺
相比那些青色

红的邪恶
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-01-01 23:18:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

一只想飞的苹果,背叛一棵树的承诺
相比那些青色

红的邪恶

很有诗的感觉~新年快乐!
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杯中冲浪
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2009-01-02 15:18:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首很现实,如果诗性足一些,会更好。
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望银河
童生


Joined: 16 May 2008
Posts: 13

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PostPosted: 2009-01-05 02:25:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好2位同仁!多谢了来读
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布衣阳光
童生


Joined: 01 Jan 2009
Posts: 27
Location: 中国吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2009-01-07 14:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

来看看家乡的后生,不错!
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