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《圣诞礼物》外一
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 02:07:20    Post subject: 《圣诞礼物》外一 Reply with quote

《圣诞礼物》



我希望的圣诞礼物是:
圣诞老人驾着七色鹿雪橇
正奔向你的城市。我藏在圣诞袜内
作为礼物的礼物,被丢在你的身旁。
见你正低头看河里的一条锦鲤。
我像个陌生女子
从你身后反复地经过。
那条锦鲤也像我一般,游过来,荡过去。
你只管看,神情专注,又深情。


《冬眠不觉寒》


冬至过后,气温一日寒过一日
我躲在暖气房间里练习冬眠。
窗外的树木仍在替我模拟春天,头顶华冠。
冷,全是行人的冷,而树不知。

那些树,在没有太阳的天空下
张开生动的手臂。一副拥抱姿势
全然不顾胸腔打开后的冷风直灌
不顾细枝末节的情节,冻伤后的痛痒难耐。

我看到:园丁们正在给树身上涂白石灰
一张白垩脸,生硬苍白,拒人千里之外。
这可有效防止更多的虫子攻入内心。
可宁静独处,可一个人坠入
比精神恍惚更为深沉的冥想。

而我一冥想,树的内心就荡漾如湖水。
旧江湖上,莲叶颓废,睡莲睡在春深处。
圆形的轨迹,不能圆满的往事。留声机反复吟唱
一首无声的歌。你有钥匙,要不要一起来听?

年轮如电波,枝桠枝桠发往天空。
天空不老,凝重如琥珀。
你会接住,如接住冬眠的春天。
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赵福治
探花


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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 02:14:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

圣诞老人驾着七色鹿雪橇
正奔向你的城市
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韩少君
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 14:28:33    Post subject: 让 Reply with quote

这礼物最好让我收到。圣诞快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 14:37:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

我像个陌生女子
从你身后反复地经过。
那条锦鲤也像我一般,游过来,荡过去

祝圣诞,新年快乐
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俞伟远
秀才


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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 16:23:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

一冥想,树的内心就荡漾如湖水
...........
年轮如电波,枝桠枝桠发往天空。
天空不老,凝重如琥珀。
你会接住,如接住冬眠的春天。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 16:38:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

圣诞快乐.
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上城
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-12-30 07:33:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

语句非常有诗意。诗,越来越冷了

以后重温肯定非常温暖~~

祝元旦快乐
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星垂月涌
童生


Joined: 25 Dec 2008
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Location: 成都
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PostPosted: 2008-12-30 21:57:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

想象奇,又用舒缓的语句承揽着诗意。
做到了无痕无迹,赞!
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上城
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 21:09:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

四川成都有很多诗人。最近看了一本《第三代诗人》(名字好像是这样的),好吓人

密密麻麻的都是名字


翟永明女诗人在成都还开了一个酒吧
http://baike.baidu.com/view/133603.htm
Very Happy
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邹崧蔚
童生


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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 22:11:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一个,问好朋友。
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遛达的七七
秀才


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PostPosted: 2009-01-01 15:33:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

喂, 陌生女子! 不要游来荡去的啦, 烦人---好诗都被你写完啦, 藕们就嫉妒一下算啦!!

哈, 新好, 美女 Smile
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黄种酷
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PostPosted: 2009-01-01 16:25:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

年轮如电波,枝桠枝桠发往天空。
天空不老,凝重如琥珀。
你会接住,如接住冬眠的春天。
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