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疏篱小筑

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冰清
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Posted: 2008-12-31 09:49:10 Post subject: 疏篱小筑

疏篱小筑 --新年感怀和风细雨送年华皓发庞眉伴脸霞池小不愁根蒂浅滢滢自是月如花 08/12/31

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Posted: 2008-12-31 14:44:20 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀

和风细雨送年华
皓发庞眉伴脸霞
池小不愁根蒂浅
滢滢自是月如花

08/12/31

冰清老师新年快乐！

七绝步韵奉和

独秀冰清占素华，流光暖日抹明霞。
沉檀称寿倾春碧，无限佳思笑似花。

：）））
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Posted: 2008-12-31 19:24:15 Post subject:

问好冰清老师,新年快乐! _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2008-12-31 19:37:55 Post subject:

问好冰清老师,新年快乐! 我想说一句特别的,结果是重复了野航的话 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

冰清
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Posted: 2008-12-31 20:14:13 Post subject:

谢谢袖袖野航和岛主。新年来了，我听到回响在天际的钟声和礼炮声，依然像孩子一样乐呵呵的！让我们共同铭记这充满希望，充满生机的一刻。祝你们新年好运，安康！

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Posted: 2008-12-31 22:53:00 Post subject:

一岭韶芳万岭华百川冰阵灿云霞梅腮春动千千树一夜风催万树花 _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

孬不好
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Posted: 2009-01-01 05:48:12 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀

和风细雨送年华
皓发庞眉伴脸霞
池小不愁根蒂浅
滢滢自是月如花

08/12/31

冰清老师新年快乐！

七绝步韵奉和

独秀冰清占素华，流光暖日抹明霞。
沉檀称寿倾春碧，无限佳思笑似花。

：）））

七绝步韵奉和

严冬独步奉芳华，冰雪融融挽作霞。
甘被风霜牵破妒，清姿岁岁映桃花。

Laughing

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连南河
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Posted: 2009-01-01 14:03:29 Post subject:

七绝过新年，和冰清《疏篱小筑——新年感怀》清歌一曲问年华，冰雪迎新望彩霞。岁末钟声听雨浅，小城昨夜绣窗花。 Jan 1, 2009 Toronto _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-03 13:49:41 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀

和风细雨送年华
皓发庞眉伴脸霞
池小不愁根蒂浅
滢滢自是月如花 08/12/31

冰清老师新年快乐！

七绝步韵奉和

独秀冰清占素华，流光暖日抹明霞。
沉檀称寿倾春碧，无限佳思笑似花。

谢谢袖袖美好的祝愿

江郎梦笔喜涂鸦
巧遇仙姑送紫花
檀子遮兰黄黑去
是望年年伴棠华

祝新年快乐吉祥！

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-03 14:05:25 Post subject:

金凤呈祥元日称觞点墨鸦，引来金凤满枝桠。疏桐犂老喜衷曲，心畅意随长乐华。金沙浪子、孬不好、连南河, 谢谢你们! 祝新年快乐吉祥！

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Posted: 2009-01-03 15:56:03 Post subject: 新年感怀

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

步韵奉和冰清《新年感怀》

曈曈元日暖京华，一片冰清十里霞。
禹甸长安歌不绝，三通两岸正开花。
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冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-07 08:53:09 Post subject:

wenshan wrote:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

步韵奉和冰清《新年感怀》
曈曈元日暖京华，一片冰清十里霞。
禹甸长安歌不绝，三通两岸正开花。
...

wenshan禹甸长歌,大吉大利.依韵和之

卅载相欢锦似霞
长虹一抹万千家
惊看龙脉横天过
醒觉庭前姊妹花

南之北
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Posted: 2009-01-07 15:42:47 Post subject:

清新小巧而有深意，非常欣赏！问好楼主！ _________________ 我的诗词吾爱网个人主页：http://www.52shici.com/space.php?mem_id=6419

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Posted: 2009-01-08 21:46:09 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

冰清老师新年好，次韵一首：

新年感怀

风高北美送年华，千里山林望晚霞。
秋叶谐时与并进，飘零泥下待春花。

Laughing

wenshan
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Posted: 2009-01-09 12:03:40 Post subject: 新年感怀

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

次韵奉和《新年感怀》之二

寸阴瞬息惜芳华，水漾波光望落霞。
雪压霜欺无恨悔，飘零秋叶待春花*

*注：化用秋叶兄“秋叶皆时与并进，飘零泥下待春花”诗意。
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Posted: 2009-01-09 19:24:57 Post subject:

好诗好和, 提

暗浮烟
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Posted: 2009-01-12 16:19:38 Post subject:

路过，踩个脚印。

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-15 10:43:00 Post subject:

谢谢南之北、白水、暗浮烟. 希望多指点!

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-15 10:48:07 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

冰清老师新年好，次韵一首：

新年感怀

风高北美送年华
千里山林望晚霞
秋叶皆时与并进
飘零泥下待春花
...

读秋斑"飘零泥下待春花"有感

飘零莫叹一儒商
行迹匆匆为那桩
劲节如君成色好
枫桥琥珀是华章

一望平林无际涯
高山远岸也安家
阳春浸浸清酥雨*
霜醉又开二月花

呵呵,每年三四月采集枫汁酿出
的枫叶糖,还是加拿大的特产

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-15 10:53:44 Post subject:

wenshan wrote:

冰清 wrote:

疏篱小筑
--新年感怀
...

次韵奉和《新年感怀》之二

寸阴瞬息惜芳华，水漾波光望落霞。
雪压霜欺无恨悔，飘零秋叶待春花*

*注：化用秋叶兄“秋叶皆时与并进，飘零泥下待春花”诗意。
...

出篱门立雪：读秋叶闻山路明诗有感

雪掩篱笆骨子斜
推门尺蠖又寒鸦
可看岳岳不挠处
自在呵呵揉玉沙

哟,前几天多伦多下大雪,最低气温-20多度.
我除接送小外孙,哪儿也没去

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