雨时
童生
Joined: 25 Apr 2008
Posts: 78
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 Posted: 2008-12-26 06:11:06 Post subject: 末班车 |
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街头花树一时凋，楼外旗幡五色招。
小站车来伊不见，灯光月影过廊桥。 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-12-26 16:30:31 Post subject: |
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等车感悟  |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2008-12-26 16:46:05 Post subject: |
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| “楼外旗幡五色招”, 特喜欢这一句. 问好雨时! |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-12-26 17:32:48 Post subject: |
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| 是否遗梦在廊桥？ |
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雨时
童生
Joined: 25 Apr 2008
Posts: 78
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| Posted: 2008-12-27 17:56:53 Post subject: |
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| 一一谢过楼上诸君赏光！问好：） |
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游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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| Posted: 2008-12-27 19:24:43 Post subject: |
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和雨时
小寒欲到百花凋，哪管伊人在前招。古木铮铮风雪处，稚枝又笑对廊桥。
下面是雨时原诗
街头花树一时凋，楼外旗幡五色招。
小站车来伊不见，灯光月影过廊桥。
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人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。 |
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雨时
童生
Joined: 25 Apr 2008
Posts: 78
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| Posted: 2008-12-28 00:55:09 Post subject: |
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| 谢和！问好！ |
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南之北
童生
Joined: 02 Dec 2008
Posts: 81
Location: 大陆
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| Posted: 2008-12-28 03:40:25 Post subject: |
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古味新意，问好！
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雨时
童生
Joined: 25 Apr 2008
Posts: 78
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| Posted: 2008-12-29 01:08:26 Post subject: |
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| 多谢！问好！ |
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