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七绝打油和歪不正

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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:50:24 Post subject: 七绝打油和歪不正

七绝打油和歪不正歪歪正正几花枝，好好孬孬说到痴。去去来来多少次，行行句句尽成诗。歪不正原玉：脱冰披雪两三枝，羞点娇容也有痴。勾兑香油成一色，煎烹豆腐味滋诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:57:13 Post subject:

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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:59:15 Post subject:

晕油个: 小袖一甩好几枝, 歪歪孬孬令人痴豆浆豆花豆腐脑, 无需饮酒也有诗

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Posted: 2008-12-26 19:17:55 Post subject:

不晕头上菊花插几枝, 不歪不正惹人痴. 豆腐坊中人气旺, 炊烟袅袅也为诗.

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Posted: 2008-12-26 19:32:25 Post subject:

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楼主好捷才！

谢南兄！

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Posted: 2008-12-26 19:33:35 Post subject:

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晕

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谢白水兄凑趣！

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Posted: 2008-12-26 19:34:24 Post subject:

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谢晓松兄助阵！

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Posted: 2008-12-26 21:53:22 Post subject:

七绝步韵奉和乞声听唱一牵枝，荡气回肠仅入痴。莫怨妹儿歪不正，沙龙几语胜千诗。：））） _________________

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Posted: 2008-12-26 22:41:17 Post subject:

真诚藏袖留一枝，看花直爱花也痴。白水一杯邀明月，青莲却说我无诗。。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 02:55:34 Post subject:

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qinghongh wrote:

七绝打油和歪不正
歪歪正正几花枝，好好孬孬说到痴。
去去来来多少次，行行句句尽成诗。

七绝步韵奉和

垂情异域访梅枝，不料冰山阻我痴。
欲赏黄昏风又送，吱吱霍霍却无诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 02:58:48 Post subject:

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真诚藏袖留一枝，看花直爱花也痴。白水一杯邀明月，青莲却说我无诗。。

七绝步韵奉和

黄生折柳尽柔枝，挥手扬帆痛忍痴。
愁入双溪空断续，熏熏酒气未醒诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 04:02:58 Post subject:

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(1). 被人暗中绊了一跤.
(2). "小样, 敢对我暗中使绊子! ——哼！"
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Posted: 2008-12-27 04:05:51 Post subject:

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不晕

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头上菊花插几枝, 不歪不正惹人痴.
豆腐房中人气旺, 炊烟袅袅也为诗.

七绝步韵奉和

探得春来急踏枝，步摇钗动约谁痴。
偏宜笑语随香至，生怕流霞暗递诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 04:07:25 Post subject:

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晓松 wrote:

孬不好 wrote:

　　

(1). 被人暗中绊了一跤.
(2). "小样, 敢对我暗中使绊子! ——哼！"
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Posted: 2008-12-27 04:11:22 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

晕

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油个:
小袖一甩好几枝, 歪歪孬孬令人痴
豆浆豆花豆腐脑, 无需饮酒也有诗

七绝步韵奉和

清才逸气一枝枝，红布兜兜猎众痴。
点破香尘一瓢酒，算盘珠子唱成诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 04:49:11 Post subject:

借来妙笔做梅枝，厨艺高超豆腐痴。又画又烹滋味好，忽悠嬉闹烩成诗。

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Posted: 2008-12-27 10:50:59 Post subject:

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孬不好 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

晕

Laughing

Laughing

油个:
小袖一甩好几枝, 歪歪孬孬令人痴
豆浆豆花豆腐脑, 无需饮酒也有诗

七绝步韵奉和

清才逸气一枝枝，红布兜兜猎众痴。
点破香尘一瓢酒，算盘珠子唱成诗。

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还记得你唐兄的算盘珠子呢, 再给你一次, 叫你JJ 别扣你工资 Wink

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红布兜兜?问YY好

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Posted: 2008-12-27 11:26:00 Post subject:

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游向高原的鱼 wrote:

真诚藏袖留一枝，看花直爱花也痴。白水一杯邀明月，青莲却说我无诗。。

问好高原鱼, 临屏草和, 也送九月薄荷. 顺祝你们新年快乐.
七绝<鱼梦>
梦里游鱼三两只, 高原冲浪为谁痴?
薄荷一盏邀美酒, 才子佳人信手诗

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Posted: 2008-12-27 19:36:49 Post subject:

谢谢白水，祝你快乐幸福！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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游向高原的鱼 wrote:

谢谢白水，祝你快乐幸福！

鱼兄, 你怎么投降了? Laughing

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