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七律骑游乐

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-26 03:09:19 Post subject: 七律骑游乐

作客成都期间,有幸应邀参加了一次老年骑游队活动,他们以三轮车当坐骑,车身印有"夕阳无限好,不怕近黄昏","夕阳无限好,天下任我游"的字样,其心态之好,可见一般.老人们出游,宠辱皆忘,自得其乐. 不骑大马不骑驴竟把三轮当宝车来去自由称便利回旋任意得宽余出游偏爱农家院伫足钟情野草庐不怕黄昏人已老晚霞映照灿长渠 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-12-26 04:15:41 Post subject:

老顽童，好心态！祝老人们晚年健康幸福长寿！

孬不好
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Posted: 2008-12-26 04:32:26 Post subject:

七律步韵奉和蓑衣斗笠倒骑驴，马走窝巢炮打车。一盏浓茶知晓暮，三圈麻将度闲余。闻鸡起舞云龙剑，入梦横陈杜甫庐。何是夕阳无限好，养兰画竹赏芙渠。 _________________ 除了奉和，我什么也不说。因为我是一个没有教养的人。

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-26 04:49:47 Post subject:

真为你们高兴

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-26 17:08:55 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏白水的祝福和关注. 谢谢歪姑娘和诗,比老朽有灵气.歪姑娘可是袖袖姊妹中人? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:01:38 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

作客成都期间,有幸应邀参加了一次老年骑游队活动,他们以三轮车
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出游偏爱农家院伫足钟情野草庐

不怕黄昏人已老晚霞映照灿长渠

黄老师好兴致，问候新年好！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:28:39 Post subject:

谢秋叶,问新年好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Posted: 2008-12-26 18:35:32 Post subject:

黄老兄, "不骑大马不骑驴竟把三轮当宝车", 流畅, 喜欢!

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2008-12-26 21:29:46 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢谢庆宏白水的祝福和关注.
谢谢歪姑娘和诗,比老朽有灵气.歪姑娘可是袖袖姊妹中人?

黄老，你可能没注意到歪歪的签名：除了奉和，我什么也不说。因为我是一个没有教养的人。

别难为她了。歪歪是我的妹妹：）））
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征尘载袖
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Posted: 2008-12-26 21:49:48 Post subject:

qinghongh兄、白水姐姐、黄老、秋叶兄、晓松兄，以及浏览本贴的朋友们：　　歪歪让我转告，原句中“武当剑”的“武”拗无救了，所以改成“云龙剑”。尽管没有显示出修改的痕迹，但是歪歪，“一个没有教养的人”，执意让我把她的“虚伪”转告给大家。：））） _________________

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-12-26 22:44:14 Post subject:

欣赏后四句。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

郑达夫
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Posted: 2008-12-27 00:45:31 Post subject:

欣赏学习 _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-28 04:05:56 Post subject:

谢谢晓松.鱼兄.达夫评阅. 歪歪"除了奉和,甚麽都不说",这可成了"奉和"的专业户了! 奉和之作在用意用词上别出心裁,另树一帜,确非易事,而歪歪.袖袖海南丢姐妹们庶可当之! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

野航
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Posted: 2008-12-28 05:28:49 Post subject:

黄老新年吉祥! 从诗中看,在国内的生活颇为悠哉,为您高兴. 伙计们斗诗又上了兴,好,来看戏. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

连南河
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Posted: 2008-12-28 08:10:01 Post subject:

SEASONS GREETINGS HAPPY NEW YEAR！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

孬不好
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Posted: 2008-12-28 15:36:10 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢谢晓松.鱼兄.达夫评阅.
歪歪"除了奉和,甚麽都不说",这可成了"奉和"的专业户了!...

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除了奉和，我什么也不说。
因为我是一个没有教养的人。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-12-29 04:13:08 Post subject:

谢野航,连南河关注,问二位新年好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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