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爱,一个刀口
陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 22:22:03    Post subject: 爱,一个刀口 Reply with quote

爱,一个刀口

陈子寒

一壶清茶,一缕青烟,午后阳光透过草帘
着装的爱迷惑眼睛,落刀的伤痛忘记结痂
混沌的幸福,清澈地体现在美丽的眸子
爱,人生的刀口,病菌在体内的潜伏期般

让爱充满呼吸,充满碰撞式的流失与激进
血液沉淀得如此利害,要落进一个圈套?
这圈套呀,采集的花草。看见嫩黄的花蕊
拥有盲目的骄傲,矜持的状态,也是沦丧

半夜时被人想起,暧昧,深深浅浅的长满
朵朵盛开的玫瑰。曾经诱惑过人与事
都已成了,隔日黄花,像极窗前的风景

机场的声音从手机那头穿越而过,划痛心
枯树开花时的娇艳,那柳絮满天的韵味
轻盈的声音,五彩碎花和无边绿叶,展开

很久没触摸文字,生疏,久不见面的恋人
古老的仪式,琳琅满目的焚香与纸,游戏
混乱不堪。铜质脸盆,袅袅娜娜水汽飘摇

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PostPosted: 2008-12-25 09:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

圣诞节快乐
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陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:21:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

铜质脸盆,袅袅娜娜水汽飘摇
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吟啸徐行
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 19:36:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

太齐整的排列形式,缺乏错落感,我以为可以适当变化一点.
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