韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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 Posted: 2007-09-18 16:41:39 Post subject: 寓言<<救小兔>> |
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救小兔
韩少君
峡谷栈道,一兔急越,一狼猛扑.
斜刺.一豹突现,拦狼大喝:徒,焉敢凌弱,猎豹在此.
狼怒.拼.败.退.
兔跪拜:谢豹伯挺身,兔得重生......
言未落,入豹口.
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他乡客
秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2007
Posts: 487
Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada)
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| Posted: 2007-09-18 17:33:14 Post subject: |
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韩老，你这是在欺负兔子呀。  |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-09-20 16:43:06 Post subject: |
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| 唉！可怜的小兔。 |
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2008-12-25 02:09:54 Post subject: |
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哈哈。小品文而已。
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秋香
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| Posted: 2008-12-25 05:14:23 Post subject: |
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有人说检验诗歌是不是散文或小说,随笔之类, 只需回车键, 看来有点道理
峡谷栈道,一兔急越,一狼猛扑.
斜刺.一豹突现,拦狼大喝:徒,焉敢凌弱,猎豹在此. 狼怒.拼.败.退. 兔跪拜:谢豹伯挺身,兔得重生......
言未落,入豹口.
这篇文章, 貌似诗歌, 但的确是篇不错的小品文 |
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