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狗的命运
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PostPosted: 2007-02-15 23:07:05    Post subject: 狗的命运 Reply with quote

狗的命运

嫖!赌!饮!不回家
谁守望着三个儿女啊
像草一样轻,一样无根
像风吹着的死亡随意飘荡
像流浪的狗和猫一样,寻不到归宿

那一天,妻子儿女坚决说:
你以后不要回家!
他终于哭了。是为了狗和猫一样的命运吗?
还是今生与妻子儿女缘分已尽?
他不明白。哭着转身,哭着走远

神灵啊!如果你安排的命运无法改变
你才是至高无尚啊!
如果此刻你也哭了,那你就是凡人
不再神圣!

他混沌了,他选择了,哭,是轻是重!
跌跌撞撞,走向荒野,走向狗拉屎的地方
他狠啊!咕噜咕噜把一瓶浓药喝下肚

几天后,有一个人惊恐地发现了一具尸体
糜烂、发臭,那就是他——
一只上帝抛弃的狗,一只吃了毒药死亡的猫
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PostPosted: 2007-02-15 23:16:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

悲哀
谁的错
命运只有在你的手中
才叫命运
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PostPosted: 2007-02-16 01:25:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常好。
有些句子令人印象深刻,如,
跌跌撞撞,。。走向狗拉屎的地方
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PostPosted: 2007-02-16 06:50:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
悲哀
谁的错
命运只有在你的手中
才叫命运
问好,新春快乐.
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PostPosted: 2007-02-16 06:51:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
非常好。
有些句子令人印象深刻,如,
跌跌撞撞,。。走向狗拉屎的地方
谢谢,问好.新春快乐!
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