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七律-回 望
秋香
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Joined: 24 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-12-24 14:56:15    Post subject: 七律-回 望 Reply with quote

一年将尽,有诗友以《回 望》为题,同题作诗,下面贴上敝作,请各位斧正。


七律-回 望


商海浮沉又一年, 风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句, 暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色, 驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦, 回首瞻前更失眠。
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-12-24 15:21:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢秋叶兄
圣诞节快乐!

把担子转交给你了
Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-12-25 14:23:56    Post subject: Reply with quote



大老板, 要知足喔. 别郁闷, 向前望, 送朵花给你吧. Wink
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秋香
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PostPosted: 2006-12-28 23:42:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="和平岛"]谢谢秋叶兄
圣诞节快乐!

把担子转交给你了
Very Happy[/quote]

谢谢岛主,岂敢,我只是有空来遛哒遛哒 Embarassed
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秋香
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PostPosted: 2006-12-28 23:45:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="月光"][img]

大老板, 要知足喔. 别郁闷, 向前望, 送朵花给你吧. Wink[/quote]

月光啊您的花太刺眼了 ,把我的眼睛弄成这样  Twisted Evil
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又一方天
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PostPosted: 2007-01-03 12:53:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

和一曲:<商海浮尘>

江湖不识路途艰 崖如刀削浪如山
喜穿绕峰重重雾 笑过跨洋道道关
风抽淝草声声戾 雨打湘竹点点斑
人生苦短无须叹 潇洒岂止权与钱
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秋香
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PostPosted: 2007-01-03 21:35:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

又一方天 wrote:
和一曲:<商海浮尘>

江湖不识路途艰 崖如刀削浪如山
喜穿绕峰重重雾 笑过跨洋道道关
风抽淝草声声戾 雨打湘竹点点斑
人生苦短无须叹 潇洒岂止权与钱


谢谢方天兄和作,真是写出又一方天也, 喜欢首联。
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-01-08 03:26:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

好寥落的心情。又一方天劝慰得好!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 17:59:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋香MM去哪了Very Happy Very Happy
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 19:52:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
秋香MM去哪了Very Happy Very Happy


白水兄, 我是:
为谋生计添烦苦, 日夜奔劳夜不眠。啊 super man


请记住我是秋叶, 顺便送上去年的一首:

七律-回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆,岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己,尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散,大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处,歌吟动地啸苍穹。
2007 12 31

寂,迹,泊—入声
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唐伯虎
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 09:07:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋香MM, 几时回来?
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 09:35:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

唐伯虎 wrote:
秋香MM, 几时回来?


唐伯虎点秋香?
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 10:12:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

唐伯虎 wrote:
秋香MM, 几时回来?


唐白水和庆宏兄,秋叶在这, 年底到了,看来又要写“回望”的时候了,请各位先贴大作,谢谢。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 14:20:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

等着呢 Very Happy
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征尘载袖
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 17:01:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

没想到,馋嘴的秋香还是个女强人啊:)


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刘浪
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PostPosted: 2008-12-16 20:17:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

看失眠的人还不少哈!

眼下该睡的香甜了吧。问好了!
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