秋香 童生
Joined: 24 Dec 2006 Posts: 40
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Posted: 2006-12-24 14:56:15 Post subject: 七律-回 望 |
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一年将尽,有诗友以《回 望》为题,同题作诗,下面贴上敝作,请各位斧正。
七律-回 望
商海浮沉又一年, 风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句, 暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色, 驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦, 回首瞻前更失眠。 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-24 15:21:35 Post subject: |
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谢谢秋叶兄
圣诞节快乐!
把担子转交给你了
 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-25 14:23:56 Post subject: |
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大老板, 要知足喔. 别郁闷, 向前望, 送朵花给你吧.  |
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秋香 童生
Joined: 24 Dec 2006 Posts: 40
秋香Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-28 23:42:37 Post subject: |
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[quote="和平岛"]谢谢秋叶兄
圣诞节快乐!
把担子转交给你了
[/quote]
谢谢岛主,岂敢,我只是有空来遛哒遛哒  |
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秋香 童生
Joined: 24 Dec 2006 Posts: 40
秋香Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-28 23:45:10 Post subject: |
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[quote="月光"][img]
大老板, 要知足喔. 别郁闷, 向前望, 送朵花给你吧. [/quote]
月光啊您的花太刺眼了 ,把我的眼睛弄成这样  |
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
又一方天Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-03 12:53:04 Post subject: |
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和一曲:<商海浮尘>
江湖不识路途艰 崖如刀削浪如山
喜穿绕峰重重雾 笑过跨洋道道关
风抽淝草声声戾 雨打湘竹点点斑
人生苦短无须叹 潇洒岂止权与钱 _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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秋香 童生
Joined: 24 Dec 2006 Posts: 40
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Posted: 2007-01-03 21:35:32 Post subject: |
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又一方天 wrote: |
和一曲:<商海浮尘>
江湖不识路途艰 崖如刀削浪如山
喜穿绕峰重重雾 笑过跨洋道道关
风抽淝草声声戾 雨打湘竹点点斑
人生苦短无须叹 潇洒岂止权与钱 |
谢谢方天兄和作,真是写出又一方天也, 喜欢首联。 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-01-08 03:26:57 Post subject: |
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好寥落的心情。又一方天劝慰得好! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-24 17:59:22 Post subject: |
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秋香MM去哪了  |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2008-03-24 19:52:02 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
秋香MM去哪了  |
白水兄, 我是:
为谋生计添烦苦, 日夜奔劳夜不眠。啊
请记住我是秋叶, 顺便送上去年的一首:
七律-回望 2007
人生回望又匆匆,岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己,尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散,大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处,歌吟动地啸苍穹。
2007 12 31
寂,迹,泊—入声 |
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唐伯虎 秀才
Joined: 26 Dec 2006 Posts: 120
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Posted: 2008-12-13 09:07:10 Post subject: |
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秋香MM, 几时回来? |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-12-13 09:35:02 Post subject: |
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唐伯虎点秋香? |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-13 10:12:13 Post subject: |
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唐白水和庆宏兄,秋叶在这, 年底到了,看来又要写“回望”的时候了,请各位先贴大作,谢谢。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 14:20:48 Post subject: |
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等着呢  |
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征尘载袖 秀才

Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 527 Location: 臭豆腐作坊 征尘载袖Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 17:01:59 Post subject: |
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没想到,馋嘴的秋香还是个女强人啊:)
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刘浪 秀才
Joined: 04 Dec 2008 Posts: 227
刘浪Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-16 20:17:57 Post subject: |
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看失眠的人还不少哈!
眼下该睡的香甜了吧。问好了! _________________ 是金子也会 花 光地 |
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