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我的爱人他要我的心

kli
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Posted: 2008-12-16 12:05:30 Post subject: 我的爱人他要我的心

我的爱人要我的心我开始哭了在哭中狂笑那个男人来啦那个欲望我的男人我给他赤裸的权力我给他进入的钥匙我开始整理我的纯洁内衣我忘了把它们丢到哪里我还找自己的心我不知道我要给他什么颜色的心血色的月光我披上了黑衣在钟声的回音里摆动身体看欲望欲望在招摇一个眼神一丝微笑我的身体随着钟声摇摆我的血液随着发丝飞舞我知道你爱我我知道你要我的心我的爱人他要我的心你看人们开始议论你看他们都有祝福的眼珠我知道你爱我我知道你要我的心我的爱人我会把心给你我将欲望的匕首刺进心里让血液如同汗水慢慢流出身体一个眼神一丝微笑我的身体随着钟声摇摆我的血随着发丝飞舞漫夜的飞血满星的欢笑我的爱人呐你抓得到多少你就拥有我多少我知道你爱我我知道你要我的心我的爱人他要我的心我知道你爱我我知道你要我的心我的爱人我会把心给你 _________________ 在剪梦堡寻找黄斌成 http://blog.creaders.net/LUKE/

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2008-12-16 14:53:13 Post subject:

以反复咏叹增加感情效果。借鉴！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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