梅山子 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 15 Location: 中国湖南 梅山子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-14 05:58:40 Post subject: 梅,盛开在雪地上(外一首) |
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绝非夸张
从骨子里孕育的种子 比骨头还硬
在雪地里 梅
以血色的印迹 戳破苍白的咒言
这是太阳的部落
怀抱火种 一直在沉默的爱恋
坚韧深嵌于思想的沟壑中
当胆怯者退缩 它就挺身而出
擎举生命至高无上的尊严
炎炎的火焰
导引着坚贞与不屈
风雪中
梅 无畏地盛开着
《查阅到你 有一种释放的轻松》
因为爱你
所以我不怕
裸露出天真与丑陋
心里蕴藏着纯粹的热烈
从眼晴里迸射而出的
同样是纯粹的热烈
因为爱你
我不怕 感受奉献的梵
总指着焦点
固执着决意的选择
显然
多少次失败无关步履
幸福象简明字典
查阅到你 有一种释放的轻松 _________________ 我歌我心,我写我情 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-14 08:04:20 Post subject: |
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好美的诗。欢迎梅山子 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 12:26:53 Post subject: |
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喜欢第二首多些,欢迎! _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 13:48:20 Post subject: |
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喜欢, 问好 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 17:26:04 Post subject: |
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雪,盛开在梅枝上~~~~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-15 21:08:35 Post subject: |
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欢迎您来落尘!
笔触有些熟悉,有一种自顾自的强悍。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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