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心,破了一个洞
陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 02:39:43    Post subject: 心,破了一个洞 Reply with quote

心,破了一个洞

陈子寒

觉得有些累了,很多事情,人不是忘不掉
其实明明已放下,折磨,一种瘾,过度反省
一种病。病入膏肓。奔走在没尽头的旷野

没方向,没终点,因疲惫才奔跑。自己知道
一旦停下来,便再也没有力气爬起,摄人
不是没知觉,而是越疼越不可以停下来
血流成河。心,破了个洞。适合赤道和北极

有汩汩液体流出,总以为什么都可以填充
整整几十个春秋,都塞进去了,清晰如昨天
这一路遇见很多人,给许多爱,讨好多无奈
预支些许幸福,透支寂寞。施舍很多眼泪

再也看不到人时,细数身上的伤痕。逼迫
自己背负着。拿别人的过错惩罚,算种放逐
阴霾的天空下雨,泥泞中步履蹒跚。跌倒
爬起,满脸的泥浆。满身肮脏,褴褛的衣衫

奢华的乞丐,讨遍了人间悲欢离合,讨遍
红尘爱恨情痴,前世如梦,几番轮回
坐在今生的路边,等候那个捡我回家的女人

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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 04:48:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言还不错,如果能用意象说话会诗意些~
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陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 13:38:58    Post subject: 奢华的乞丐,讨遍了人间悲欢离合,讨遍 Reply with quote

奢华的乞丐,讨遍了人间悲欢离合,讨遍
红尘爱恨情痴,前世如梦,几番轮回
坐在今生的路边,等候那个捡我回家的女人

http://blog.sina.com.cn/shakesthunder
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陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 23:09:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

祈求上苍,再爱我一次,不能
那么让我忘记,就像从来不曾来过一样
让所有记忆全部离开我的身体,离开离开
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 14:16:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

自然, 抒情
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