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如梦令《古渡》

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莹雪
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Posted: 2008-12-14 00:15:51 Post subject:

[quote="征尘载袖"]

莹雪 wrote:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令<舞>
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奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）

收起闲情乱绪，领略雪飞风舞。
远寺又鸣钟，还有管弦和鼓。
停步，停步，聊悟佛家禅趣。

欣赏MM好词，好久不见，问好MM Razz

莹雪MM，我比你大点儿：）
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哦，原来是JJ

那我问好姐姐！袖姐姐好 Razz

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Posted: 2008-12-14 00:43:08 Post subject:

白云朵朵寄乡愁，水远山高思悠悠。月下花前独徘佪，光阴荏苒若水流。 -------赠白水 Moonlight

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-12-14 01:15:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

谢过MM好词, 草和一首, 别笑

淡扫愁情惘绪, 轻袅烛红香舞.
祠庙木鱼声, 敲碎怨箫哀鼓.
莲步, 莲步, 素面向佛寻趣.

问好JJ！草和白水JJ

碎玉书诗雅绪，年末轻灵妙舞。
钟罄伴禅声，似述尘间暮鼓，
闲步，闲步，惊破梦中幽趣。

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Posted: 2008-12-14 04:06:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如梦令<舞>
...

奴不善和，幸有旧吟步韵，恭奉雅赏：）
...

谢过MM好词, 草和一首, 别笑
...

姐姐，你说我怎能不笑，我都说过不是我写的，你还说跟我和。好了，我再贴一首，还不是我写的：）

自剃凡根孽绪，未断裙风柳舞。
可惜庙堂中，只备木鱼钟鼓。
羞语，羞语，次第俗缘尘趣。

这是一个小尼姑索要墨宝时，我哥写的，已收录到《巡闺捣句》。这个小尼姑有很高的音乐天赋，会演奏古筝、二胡、笛子和箫：）
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Posted: 2008-12-14 10:12:21 Post subject:

袖袖, 这么说是闲坐小窗的小爪挠出来的了? 早知莫如不和. 记得你们曾经发过它的照片, 闲坐在小窗旁的整个是一只懒猫来着. 白水尘缘未断, 还是喜欢和你们这些漂亮MM们的诗词, 和不好逃了就是 ANYWAY, 还是硬着头皮学一首. 学艺不精, 别打妙媌喵庙瞄妙媌喵庙瞄妙媌喵庙妙媌喵庙瞄妙喵庙瞄妙媌喵庙猫猫, 猫猫瞄瞄媌妙媌喵庙

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Posted: 2008-12-14 16:29:26 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

谢过MM好词, 草和一首, 别笑

淡扫愁情惘绪, 轻袅烛红香舞.
祠庙木鱼声, 敲碎怨箫哀鼓.
莲步, 莲步, 素面向佛寻趣.

问好JJ！草和白水JJ
问好JJ！草和白水JJ

碎玉书诗雅绪，年末轻灵妙舞。
钟罄伴禅声，似述尘间暮鼓，
闲步，闲步，惊破梦中幽趣。
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MM, 你的词越写越好了. 谢谢.

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-14 16:36:12 Post subject:

穆平 wrote:

白云朵朵寄乡愁，
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谢谢赠诗, 收藏了

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Posted: 2008-12-14 18:48:30 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

袖袖, 这么说是闲坐小窗的小爪挠出来的了? 早知莫如不和.
...

明白了，姐姐这是想跟我哥切磋一下：）

姐姐，有件事儿我一直没想明白，我们关注的两位喜欢多愁善感的姐姐都去看过《巡闺捣句》，一位留墨了，另一位溜了。你说溜了的这位是不是止不住泪水才躲了？：）
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Posted: 2008-12-14 18:56:40 Post subject:

这么严重你们都写了些什么让大家流眼泪, 快过年了, 要让大家笑才是. JJ想你们, 就是因为你们是开心果.

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Posted: 2008-12-14 21:02:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 你的词越写越好了. 谢谢.

谢谢JJ鼓励，偶最近比较懒，所以没怎么写。从现在起，偶开始勤奋 Razz

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Posted: 2008-12-14 23:09:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这么严重

你们都写了些什么让大家流眼泪, 快过年了, 要让大家笑才是. JJ想你们, 就是因为你们是开心果. Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-12-15 02:14:31 Post subject:

还有狐步狐步

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Posted: 2008-12-15 14:19:55 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这么严重

你们都写了些什么让大家流眼泪, 快过年了, 要让大家笑才是. JJ想你们, 就是因为你们是开心果. Very Happy

这位又是谁

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Posted: 2008-12-15 14:22:53 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这么严重

你们都写了些什么让大家流眼泪, 快过年了, 要让大家笑才是. JJ想你们, 就是因为你们是开心果. Very Happy

袖袖灌水卖假酒，该罚！

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:29:38 Post subject:

蠢读斋主人 wrote:

还有狐步狐步

你也喜欢跳舞

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Posted: 2008-12-15 16:54:27 Post subject:

进来学习！问候白水！ _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2008-12-18 20:35:23 Post subject:

如梦令.才媛低唱多次阅读诗友唱和的<如梦令>,真是异彩纷呈,美不胜收. 不由学步,续貂一首. 饮马芳林深处惊见轻移香雾才媛影婷婷低唱浅吟南浦徐步徐步侧耳凝神听诉 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-12-21 14:50:47 Post subject:

刘浪 wrote:

进来学习！问候白水！

谢谢刘浪, 你也喜欢写古韵吗? 太好了 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-12-21 15:18:22 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

如梦令.才媛低唱
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谢谢黄老师,很喜欢. 祝你阖家圣诞节快乐

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Posted: 2008-12-23 23:46:10 Post subject:

歪不正 wrote:

方识云峰雪麓，又忆叶红飘舞。
如此惜流年，只好皱纹颜驻。
羞诉，羞诉，闲却诗词曲赋。

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