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白水
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Posted: 2008-12-12 04:47:42 Post subject: 苹果树下

苹果树下那个男人累了点燃一支劣质香烟挤进星空一闪一闪. 我从不吸烟却更玩味削了皮的苹果不信你偿偿这个世界, 削了皮的苹果最甜 <苹果树下> 之牛顿定理题记: 地上有一个人死去, 天上一定会有一颗流星陨落万有引力万有引力注定了牛顿那颗智慧的头颅要和地球相撞白花花的脑仁让我看到剥了皮的苹果, 如果夏娃不吃亞当的胸腔怎么会少一根肋骨如果亞当不吃怎么会有当今牛顿著名的万有引力?

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Posted: 2008-12-12 22:17:14 Post subject:

问好！削了皮的黄连最苦！削了皮的良心最软！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-12-13 00:36:28 Post subject:

意识流跟着感觉来也不错吗问好姐 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-12-13 01:17:14 Post subject:

却更玩味削了皮的苹果不信你偿偿这个世界, 削了皮的苹果最甜

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Posted: 2008-12-13 01:18:04 Post subject:

那个男人累了点燃一支劣质香烟。。。。。。抚弄着衣扣嗔道：不信你偿偿这个世界, 削了皮的苹果最甜 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-13 04:13:49 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

问好！
削了皮的黄连最苦！
削了皮的良心最软！

谢谢理解.
那日和朋友聊起著名歌星小甜甜的遭遇, 想起各类明星的传闻, 难免感慨......

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-13 04:20:53 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

意识流跟着感觉来也不错吗问好姐

DD好眼力, 的确是潜意识的外溢. 苹果是人类的起源, 苹果树下, 会让你感觉人生. 随笔记了一些, 太忙, 为及整理, 会陆续发一些.

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-13 04:23:57 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

却更玩味削了皮的苹果
不信你偿偿
这个世界, 削了皮的苹果
最甜

问好子花. 最近很少见你. 盼常回来

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Posted: 2008-12-13 04:25:20 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

那个男人累了
...

没人, 罚你面主三日, 好好祈祷 Twisted Evil

白水
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Posted: 2008-12-13 06:43:36 Post subject:

<苹果树下> 之牛顿定理题记: 地上有一个人死去, 天上一定会有一颗流星陨落万有引力万有引力注定了牛顿那颗智慧的头颅要和地球相撞白花花的脑仁让我看到剥了皮的苹果, 如果夏娃不吃亞当的胸腔怎么会少一根肋骨如果亞当不吃怎么会有当今牛顿著名的万有引力?

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Posted: 2008-12-13 18:42:50 Post subject:

喜欢是我唯一的感觉，问好白大姐，问候各位朋友。 _________________ 我能说什么呢，我什么也没有说，是他在说。

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Posted: 2008-12-13 19:48:39 Post subject:

意识流影子感觉【一闪一闪】

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Posted: 2008-12-13 23:16:57 Post subject:

尝尝，没有皮的苹果果然没有皮的味道，是很甜。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-12-14 00:35:21 Post subject:

据说苹果的营养都在皮里呢 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2008-12-14 02:45:33 Post subject:

这个世界, 削了皮的苹果最甜从苹果的味道领略丰富的内涵：） _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2008-12-14 04:45:03 Post subject:

前后两节跳得比较开~

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Posted: 2008-12-14 07:10:52 Post subject:

蒙古大夫处方： An apple a day, ,keep doctor away. (忘问该不该削皮了）。

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Posted: 2008-12-14 08:44:30 Post subject:

邹崧蔚 wrote:

喜欢是我唯一的感觉，问好白大姐，问候各位朋友。

谢谢喜欢.
以后还是叫我白水吧, 还是那句话, 诗歌是灵魂的, 灵魂无性别. 问好 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-12-14 08:47:51 Post subject:

曲元奇 wrote:

意识流影子感觉【一闪一闪】

谢谢元奇, 【一闪一闪】抓得太好了, 我闪了好多呢,顺手画在纸上, 就是没时间打字 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-12-14 09:01:26 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

尝尝，没有皮的苹果果然没有皮的味道，是很甜。

谢谢冲浪. 这也是和你那日论诗后得到的感悟吧. 诗歌的确应该减少太多华丽的包装.
透过现象看本质, 相信每个人的眼睛都能看到适合自己的不同的层面, 过多的包装的确多余.

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