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微型3首(生活感悟)(绝对精品)
吉林王瀚伟
童生


Joined: 29 Nov 2008
Posts: 59

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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 15:20:15    Post subject: 微型3首(生活感悟)(绝对精品) Reply with quote

微型3首(生活感悟)



吉林王瀚伟12月13日作品

马路三思(绝对精品)



《垃圾箱》



立天地之间
从早到晚 看
世界怎么黑暗


《站牌》


一根筋

老妈妈来问儿子从哪条路回来


《红绿灯》


三只眼

盲人在又拓宽的马路越走越窄

2008、12、13
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杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 03:55:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首还可以。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 04:30:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

rose 精个 Wink
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邹崧蔚
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 19:03:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏后一首,问好朋友。
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吉林王瀚伟
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 03:47:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
rose 精个 Wink
谢谢老师鼓励,问好!!!!!!!!!!
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