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我的小诗<<有关豹子抑或其他>>
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 18:58:28    Post subject: 我的小诗<<有关豹子抑或其他>> Reply with quote

有关豹子抑或其他


想起豹子,总是在辽阔的抽象中
混沌无比,豹子
不紧不慢不紧不慢地走着
对于傲慢对于孤独对于精神,一点都不在乎
当然,也不需要去微笑
脚步诠释着力量,力量诠释着神话
在自己的世界里做着自己
当然,也可以做一做神仙或国王
做一做没有对手的形象
也可以把精神分裂成世俗的生活,懒散地睡觉
2007.1.19下午于中都城
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 19:01:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

又发了一次在这个专栏,请朋友们点评.
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¤当树的叶子再次泛绿,繁华
¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 19:08:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

也可以把精神分裂成世俗的生活,懒散地睡觉

深入浅出的味道,不错
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 19:19:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢,朋友!在现实中,我们关注了太多的外在的东西并被它们迷惑,忽视了自我,忽视了原生态的生活.我想还豹子一个真实的形象. Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-02-14 19:56:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

人和豹子的意像结合得很好
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PostPosted: 2007-02-14 22:13:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

自由自在的豹子!我读到诗外的东西。喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-02-15 05:39:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位老大的点评!一定继续努力!
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PostPosted: 2007-02-15 05:48:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

做一做没有对手的形象
也可以把精神分裂成世俗的生活,懒散地睡觉
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写的有味道。呵呵,问好
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PostPosted: 2007-02-15 05:54:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢下一个偶像是野兽!正在看你的新作呢.
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