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默默的生命
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PostPosted: 2008-12-09 19:01:57    Post subject: 默默的生命 Reply with quote

他和黑山羊走过河冰的时候
午后的阳光
刮起了北风

膝盖叫喊疼痛
早年种下的多种病根
此时借着北风
都在苏醒

那边有被羊群啃过的枯草
和收割后
遗留的秸秆

他和他不会说话的
生命伙伴
从村的风口
走进山坳的风洞

没有人知道
儿女不会知道
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-12-10 12:34:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

小处见景,曲兄风格愈趋完整。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-10 17:35:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢诗盗兄一直关注
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PostPosted: 2008-12-11 07:12:22    Post subject: 希望这里能带给您些许动力。 Reply with quote

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谢谢诗盗兄一直关注

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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 07:54:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,问曲兄好。好久不见!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 17:53:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

想起那幅“父亲”的油画。。。生存和爱的故事。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-13 19:31:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 拈花兄 问好苏茉儿
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 08:11:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

有力度。
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