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情人 之二 (转帖十四行)
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-12-06 21:18:59    Post subject: 情人 之二 (转帖十四行) Reply with quote

情人

明斯克的十四行

热情洋溢 眼神温柔
在灯光下尽显胴体的自信
魅力不减的少妇啊 有
多少馨香在我内心流沁

双眼微醺 声音颤抖
卷发披肩的夜晚
风韵在曲线里行走
让不安的心更加不安

我用尽美丽 芬芳的词汇
你的性感掩盖了真美
让可爱明眸无法描绘 我粗糙的手
在凝香里显得如此卑微

我柔顺的回答如你泪下
我们的光洁如河边月华


明斯克 :四平市一汽修厂老板。钱没少挣,养了一群女人。
唯一的积蓄是手下的几个高徒。口头禅----报废!
看书 写诗 不加入任何文学组织。信任胡锦涛,拥护温家宝。但对四平市委市政府却抱有极大怀疑。
(不愿公开姓名)
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-12-06 21:24:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

我和明斯克谈到莎士比亚 白朗宁夫人 他说 写了很多 拿不出手
我看了 商籁体 还押韵 即 ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
就转帖了。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-06 22:25:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

还好,有点平。感觉不如之前的。个见。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-07 00:37:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,这个明斯克倒是挺多情的!也很感性!支持!
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 13:50:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

本人代表明斯克 谢谢nobody 言之有理 一定转告。

同谢娇娇。多情本是人之种 色里生息永不空 ----少君格言。
特奉娇娇,还望笑纳!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 21:37:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

我对明斯克蛮感兴趣的。所以关注吧!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-09 17:04:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing 口头禅“报废” Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-12-10 04:40:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

代 明斯克谢谢 刘浪 子花二位阅读。问好!
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