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游九寨沟二首(旧作和秋叶)
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 08:58:02    Post subject: 游九寨沟二首(旧作和秋叶) Reply with quote

五律 游九寨沟

九寨景清幽,人来画内游。
绿荫消盛夏,碧水浸初秋。
泉喜珍珠跃,林深异兽悠。
风光藏世外,但愿净心留。



(注:九寨沟有珍珠滩,流水腾若珍珠。异兽:大熊猫。)

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五绝 镜海

仙姑遗宝镜,化做镜湖奇。
满目春秋色,全为碧海吸。

(注:九寨沟的镜海(湖)传说是天上仙女所遗宝镜所化而成,湖水清澈,映照山影。)
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 18:53:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏兄,改“林深异兽走“中走为“逗“如何?
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 19:38:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
庆宏兄,改“林深异兽走“中走为“逗“如何?

野航兄好建议。但“逗”为仄声,奈何?走也为仄声,权且改为悠。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 20:07:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

羡慕, 也盼一游
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PostPosted: 2008-12-06 01:52:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽然不算远,还没有去过。羡慕。
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