| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 08:58:02    Post subject: 游九寨沟二首(旧作和秋叶) |   |  
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				| 五律 游九寨沟 
 九寨景清幽,人来画内游。
 绿荫消盛夏,碧水浸初秋。
 泉喜珍珠跃,林深异兽悠。
 风光藏世外,但愿净心留。
 
 
 
 (注:九寨沟有珍珠滩,流水腾若珍珠。异兽:大熊猫。)
 
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 五绝 镜海
 
 仙姑遗宝镜,化做镜湖奇。
 满目春秋色,全为碧海吸。
 
 (注:九寨沟的镜海(湖)传说是天上仙女所遗宝镜所化而成,湖水清澈,映照山影。)
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		| 野航 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 18:53:32    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 庆宏兄,改“林深异兽走“中走为“逗“如何? _________________
 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 19:38:44    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 野航 wrote: |  
	  | 庆宏兄,改“林深异兽走“中走为“逗“如何? |  野航兄好建议。但“逗”为仄声,奈何?走也为仄声,权且改为悠。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 20:07:54    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 羡慕, 也盼一游 |  | 
	
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		| 游向高原的鱼 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-06 01:52:48    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 虽然不算远,还没有去过。羡慕。 _________________
 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。
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