| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-04 21:55:52    Post subject: 游九寨沟 |   |  
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				| 近日甚忙,昨无眠草就一首,先请方家赐教,有空拜读各位大作。 
 游九寨沟
 
 九寨秋临绣卷开, 黄红紫绿巧编裁。
 珍珠飞白悬崖瀑, 长海涂蓝绝世埃。
 歌舞烟岚萦藏舍, 湖滩盆景发青苔。
 如诗仙地难寻觅, 犹是梦中方醒来。
 
 白, 发-入声
 珍珠滩瀑布,长海,盆景滩和藏族 村寨是九寨沟其中的景点。
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
 Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 02:04:34    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋叶游川,昨夜无眠,如诗仙境,梦中醒来. 
 见诗如面,问好!
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 喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
 Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 07:04:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 重 重 画 卷 开 , 仙 景 远 尘 埃 .
 畅 意 游 川 作 ,
 缤 纷 妙 笔 来 .
 
 问好秋叶!
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 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 08:58:46    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋兄好七律,以两首旧作和。 
 五律 游九寨沟
 
 九寨景清幽,人来画内游。
 绿荫消盛夏,碧水浸初秋。
 泉喜珍珠跃,林深异兽悠。
 风光藏世外,但愿净心留。
 
 
 (注:九寨沟有珍珠滩,流水腾若珍珠。异兽:大熊猫。)
 
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 五绝 镜海
 
 仙姑遗宝镜,化做镜湖奇。
 满目春秋色,全为碧海吸。
 
 (注:九寨沟的镜海(湖)传说是天上仙女所遗宝镜所化而成,湖水清澈,映照山影。)
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		| 野航 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 18:50:55    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋叶秋游九寨沟,一枝一叶总清幽 
 问好!
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 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 21:18:25    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 黄洋界 wrote: |  
	  | 秋叶游川,昨夜无眠,如诗仙境,梦中醒来. 
 见诗如面,问好!
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 谢谢赠玉,问好老师,别来无恙,待看新诗。
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 21:36:46    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 白云闲人 wrote: |  
	  | 重 重 画 卷 开 , ...
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 白 云 舒 卷 开 ,
 洗 尽 世 尘 埃 。
 翘 首 登 高 望,
 闲 人驾 鹤 来。
 
 谢谢白云兄, 次韵和一首。
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 21:39:22    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | qinghongh wrote: |  
	  | 秋兄好七律,以两首旧作和。 ...
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 谢谢庆宏兄,和得妙,听说大熊猫在老虎海对面山林出没,镜海有上,中,下,水都很蓝,是没有污染的缘故。
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-05 21:53:00    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 野航 wrote: |  
	  | 秋叶秋游九寨沟,一枝一叶总清幽 
 问好!
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 野航远渡可将渡? 万里长风一路平。
 
 谢谢!
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-08 10:31:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 结句情余言外,妙极! 
 问好秋斑。
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		| 是有缘 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-08 19:31:09    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 难得。前年也曾游,时未留片字,后欲追,终不能得。 _________________
 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情
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		| 秋香 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-10 13:19:32    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象  |  | 
	
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-10 16:14:33    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 秋香 wrote: |  
	  | 秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象  |  
 秋叶秋香,一路芬芳。
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-12 15:55:04    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 冰清 wrote: |  
	  | 结句情余言外,妙极! 
 问好秋斑。
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 谢谢冰清老师赏读,近来安好!
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-12 15:56:47    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 是有缘 wrote: |  
	  | 难得。前年也曾游,时未留片字,后欲追,终不能得。 |  
 有空补上,待看大作。
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-12 16:03:36    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 秋香 wrote: |  
	  | 秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象  |  
 秋香秋叶何相类?已知秋香是谁人。
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		| 征尘载袖 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-23 23:51:02    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 歪不正 wrote: |  
	  | 分身乏术脱无开,九寨风光梦里裁。 叠障飞崖垂白水,滩涂泊海杜黄埃。
 浮屠澹入游人趣,爽气漫侵晓露苔。
 笑向沧溟问今古,谁知仙子可曾来?
 
 
 
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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	  | 征尘载袖 wrote: |  
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	  | 歪不正 wrote: |  
	  | 分身乏术脱无开,九寨风光梦里裁。 叠障飞崖垂白水,滩涂泊海杜黄埃。
 浮屠澹入游人趣,爽气漫侵晓露苔。
 笑向沧溟问今古,谁知仙子可曾来?
 
 
 
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 Y 兄可真是急材,没到过九寨沟比我去过的写得还妙,非凡想象力, 谢谢和作。
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		| 连南河 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-24 16:14:22    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋香秋叶美人栽, 一路芬芳九寨来.
 驾鹤闲人抬首望,
 白云深处卷帘开.
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 一路雨丝一路风
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		| 晓松 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-12-24 16:45:49    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 秋叶秋临九寨沟, 湖光山色一望收. 真令人羡慕! 问诗兄好!。 |  | 
	
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