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看病中朋友

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-11-08 23:06:10 Post subject: 看病中朋友

没有鲜花也没有朝气蓬勃的走在他的床前显得疲惫与沮丧好叫他看见窗外的世界也都生活得不易我攥着他的手握住悲伤他没有知觉他的眼睛会知道我的手的份量想起他生龙活虎的样子我加倍的同情他却不能改变没有希望的病情只能说谁吃五谷杂粮不生病我从口袋掏出药片让他看我也天天吃药他领会了我的良苦用心把仅有的生命的水份用眼睛说出两滴泪

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Posted: 2008-11-09 01:06:03 Post subject:

写得很好。我发现我快成了你那个朋友。迟早有一天会变成那个样 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-11-09 05:36:18 Post subject:

记忆所及，这是曲兄最长的作品。读完想想，生命到底是轻是重？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-11-09 05:46:29 Post subject:

勾沉２ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-11-09 19:39:24 Post subject:

谢谢

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Posted: 2008-11-09 22:01:26 Post subject:

可以流泪吗？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-11-19 07:16:04 Post subject:

嗯，活着。。。好诗啊，好诗！ _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-12-02 16:40:59 Post subject:

欣赏 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-12-04 04:25:26 Post subject:

真情出好诗

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Posted: 2008-12-04 18:35:32 Post subject:

谢谢

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Posted: 2008-12-04 18:59:35 Post subject:

感人之作. 代问你的朋友, 愿他多保重

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Posted: 2008-12-04 20:01:50 Post subject: 问好！

白水 Moonlight wrote:

感人之作. 代问你的朋友, 愿他多保重

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