悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-02 15:37:45 Post subject: 听见黄昏耳语 |
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摄影 红袖添乱
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日落之后
才知道水昏地暗,也很平静
天还会很蓝
而且纯得没有一丝犹豫
依然远离梦境
却离你的窗,很近
那一抹柔和的灯光
又是沦陷谁的心港
我漫游的迷惑
在最后一缕驼红的温暖
在夜绽放的温柔
开始分不清,夜色和你倾心的注视
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-12-02 16:07:15 Post subject: |
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好意象 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-03 08:41:00 Post subject: |
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应该修饰。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 04:22:16 Post subject: |
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很久没见,上来就给一砖头, 真哥们 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
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Posted: 2008-12-04 10:05:20 Post subject: |
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若能"听见黄昏耳语"就更妙。。。
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-12-04 13:05:00 Post subject: |
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我的心港沦陷了。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 14:47:55 Post subject: 心又沦陷一次 |
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 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 18:47:48 Post subject: |
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【黄昏的耳语】是心声 读者听到了心声 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-04 20:02:59 Post subject: 好姊姊,别客气! |
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悠子 wrote: |
很久没见,上来就给一砖头, 真哥们 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 12:44:19 Post subject: 画外音~~ |
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拈花微笑 wrote: |
若能"听见黄昏耳语"就更妙。。。
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-05 12:49:30 Post subject: 用一朵梅花托住 |
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红袖添乱 wrote: |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-12-05 12:49:45 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
悠子 wrote: |
很久没见,上来就给一砖头, 真哥们 |
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麻我。真受不了了~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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