又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-12-01 15:59:59 Post subject: 《失 落》 |
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《失 落》
轻挽一袭素雪,
斜牵万豁丹叶,
闲云丝丝缠碧野。
钓出百感层叠。
轻舟夹岸趔躞,
寒水渔火激越,
依山就势洗此阙。
笛吹一溪冷月。 _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-12-01 18:11:09 Post subject: |
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“闲云丝丝缠碧野。
钓出百感层叠。”
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-12-03 23:14:57 Post subject: |
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“闲云丝丝缠碧野。
钓出百感层叠。”
好句! |
谢谢! _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2008-12-04 06:35:49 Post subject: |
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"轻挽一袭素雪","笛吹一溪冷月".既淡素又浓情! 妙笔!! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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