老山
秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319
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 Posted: 2008-12-02 19:04:27 Post subject: 正宫 小梁州 新怀化并寄长沙赵君 |
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正宫 小梁州
新怀化并寄长沙赵君
今日新城万木稠，
舞水清流，
夕阳波下荡云楼。
夸灵秀，
还看鹤鸣洲。
钟坡垴上千花绣，
侗苗村寨亮歌喉。
赵与刘，
分离后，
梦怀思旧，
何日得同游？ |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2008-12-03 06:45:37 Post subject: |
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好曲!
描景寄思衷!
问好老山!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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又一方天
秀才
Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385
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| Posted: 2008-12-03 23:07:35 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
好曲!
描景寄思衷!
问好老山! |
附议
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空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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老山
秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319
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| Posted: 2008-12-05 06:00:13 Post subject: 谢谢 |
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问好白云闲人 又一方天，
谢谢点评。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-12-05 16:30:14 Post subject: |
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“梦怀思旧，
何日得同游？”
自然化用白居易《忆江南》句，用得好！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2008-12-09 17:00:23 Post subject: |
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| 拜读! 呵呵，想不到老山兄散曲也写这么好。 |
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老山
秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319
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| Posted: 2008-12-12 02:33:59 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢 冰清 qinghongh 的鼓励。 |
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