又一方天
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 Posted: 2008-12-01 16:04:05 Post subject: 《寄 友》之二 |
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《寄 友》之二
山山水水，杖杖楫楫，嘗披雲裳霞衣。
鎏金證書一紙，黯然掖起。
踱踱尋尋覓覓，蹣跚裏、風風雨雨。
嶽麓峰，繾綣飛來石，銀杏輕依！
人生跌跌撞撞，似玩股、紅紅綠綠，
洗禮路彎流急，烏噪雞啼！
若得一川潑墨，塑崑崙、雪骨冰肌。
可憶得、兒時戲、欲攀摘星玄梯？
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-12-01 18:06:41 Post subject: |
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| 方天兄善用叠词！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2008-12-02 07:03:58 Post subject: |
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"若得一川泼墨,塑昆仑,雪骨冰肌." 豪气云天!
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2008-12-03 23:11:19 Post subject: 写 |
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| "若得一川泼墨,塑昆仑,雪骨冰肌." 豪气云天! |
谢谢赏读！
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2008-12-03 23:12:30 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 方天兄善用叠词！ |
谢谢玉览
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冰清
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| Posted: 2008-12-08 11:34:37 Post subject: |
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意笃情真!
嶽麓峰，繾綣飛來石，銀杏輕依！ "繾綣""輕依"出神韵. |
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