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阳光走进日子

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Posted: 2008-11-18 18:00:43 Post subject: 阳光走进日子

阳光走进日子 1 门前的老树是岁月的风景你不用颜料就优美了我的梦境当阳光飞进屋子铺满我的眼睛指头开始发烫 2 心窝有泉水经过微微泛起清澈的香一双大手由左到右轻轻举起我眼中的美丽并没有酒的韵色空气却醉成春天的泥 3 我抱着满怀的温暖寻找一个袋子细节洗去一个个锁孔的尘垢天堂鸟优雅的歌声飘着甜甜的音符把梦打开一个久违的脚步悄然而至 4 我把围裙扔进厨房仔细对着镜子打扮时光那个陈旧的老挂钟也开始温柔了步履每一个响动都是那么小心翼翼生怕惊醒梦中花开的传奇 2008.11.15 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-18 18:18:38 Post subject:

想象中写诗歌的一定是个娇恬的小女孩

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Posted: 2008-11-18 19:22:36 Post subject:

确实优雅，欢迎骄娇 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-11-18 20:44:16 Post subject:

我把围裙扔进厨房仔细对着镜子打扮时光那个陈旧的老挂钟也开始温柔了步履每一个响动都是那么小心翼翼生怕惊醒梦中花开的传奇都说诗美，我说真正美的应是诗人...... 学习！ _________________ 没有国界的可望

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Posted: 2008-11-18 20:50:17 Post subject:

好诗。欣赏！欢迎新朋友！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-11-19 01:50:53 Post subject:

本人初登宝地，就有这么多诗友捧场。很感动！在此表示感谢！同少君，小城故事，和平岛和白水握手！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-20 03:19:58 Post subject:

这是一首非常好的诗。诗的感觉非常好。我想说的是它的语言给人新奇的感受。多发些诗！！问好诗人！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-11-20 03:51:20 Post subject:

晚上好！感谢海军给予这么高的评价！我会努力的！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-20 22:41:09 Post subject:

很干净的纯的诗歌~欢迎娇娇!

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Posted: 2008-11-21 00:49:36 Post subject:

握手明月！感谢你的支持！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-21 21:53:16 Post subject:

感觉敏锐，表达含蓄，张合有度。很有嚼头的作品。欢迎新朋友光临！希望看到你更多动人的诗歌。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-11-21 23:04:19 Post subject:

娇娇 wrote:

本人初登宝地，就有这么多诗友捧场。很感动！在此表示感谢！同少君，小城故事，和平岛和白水握手！

这是风水宝地。要常来，给你捧场

你好像是和少君兄是同一个“村”的
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每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-11-22 02:01:25 Post subject:

同司马，伤城握手！感谢二位了！默默的祝福！永远愉快！呵呵，和少君兄是一个城市的。 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-25 23:33:03 Post subject:

我把围裙扔进厨房仔细对着镜子打扮时光那个陈旧的老挂钟也开始温柔了步履每一个响动都是那么小心翼翼生怕惊醒梦中花开的传奇美丽的诗歌～～欢迎娇娇！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-11-27 02:37:33 Post subject:

握手！感谢琼裙支持！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-12-01 13:50:56 Post subject:

顶再鼓励一次。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-12-01 15:14:02 Post subject:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=95483#95483 再欢迎一个. 临屏草作, 别嫌弃

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Posted: 2008-12-02 01:57:51 Post subject:

娇娇哪堪白水瞧和平岛上美人礁浪里歌声天涯暖不尽春心荡海潮娇娇问候海外同胞 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-12-02 01:59:02 Post subject:

再次对少君，白水表示感谢！谢谢你们给我力量！我已经喜欢上北美了！会常来的！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-12-02 16:56:58 Post subject:

娇娇 wrote:

再次对少君，白水表示感谢！谢谢你们给我力量！我已经喜欢上北美了！会常来的！祝福！

盼常来, 希望常读到你的诗歌. 问好 Very Happy

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