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致乡间的晚风
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PostPosted: 2008-11-29 23:08:26    Post subject: 致乡间的晚风 Reply with quote

草枯叶败飞
水冷快行烈山间
黄花苍狗嗅



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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-11-30 09:26:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

若再追加一行,文字的音律可以完整。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-30 19:38:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

都是描述写景,有一句自己的心情就好了。

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