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论中国诗人其一 偶遇美女篇
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 18:42:32    Post subject: 论中国诗人其一 偶遇美女篇 Reply with quote

摇头晃脑的诵
呼呼得吐圈圈
就与鸦片结缘
行走也难太平
有时眺望着海峡
在这儿崴了脚
在那儿撞了韵

仄仄平平仄平仄
削光脑袋尖尖峭
规则都要被打破
放出畅快的恶魔
排排列全新组合
新新迷你构造

大师洛夫的诗句
剔骨头的动作
盘中飞出只天鹅
渺渺一阵风声:
“请用、请用”

中国古典的衣装
世界东方的朝阳
孤伶仃仃首古绝
裹着香香如缕魂
飘在灿灿T形台

我的小心肝
快瘦成一根漂木
从小流落他乡
聚焦在斗妍的明灯
像一把刀子剜我心
痛得泪花盈盈

青石板上的高跟鞋
“笃”、“笃”、“笃”
声声赛过蜜糖
怎么也追不上

忽地走过来一群
高、矮、胖、瘦
我都爱却只能挑一个
眼看一个个都飞走
一个也抓不住

条条修长的美腿
细得像无数竹竿
总在眼前晃荡
风中就把它摇断

比大清还虚弱
通体流淌着水银
抖落一地的艳词
真字字珠玑
才多比干

病病愈的西子
痴痴我的情侣
有着唐朝的丰腴
脚踩汉代的轻盈
我心中完美的范型!

郁郁兰陵的美酒
一颗心还烧得不够
梦乡里来沉醉
吹燃情感的死灰

就抛我一只媚眼
哦,专制的女王
一见就如遭雷击
还没靠近
我就已死掉!

人生真快乐如许
请埋葬我的帝国
实足的中国派头:
珠瓒的金莲
长长的水袖
圆圆的脸庞

蓝墨水的前方
美人香草争上游
千古飒飒的清波
多少悲魂逞风流

高扬“楚”的霸王
还我那三户中的一户
站在戎狄的墓上
就没想过是奴隶!

尝尝那苦胆,
我问自己:何时才能
复活那地下的鬼雄
累累白骨挚爱魄散
将长城哭断!!


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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 22:51:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的很自如,惊喜多多。读来令人愉悦。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 22:57:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

幽默的~~


骨子里冷冷的眼睛

问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-27 21:20:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

THANKS 感觉有点太实了,没有造出音乐的效果

等以后再想想。打算先梳理一下历史 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-11-27 21:22:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好nobody、阿依琼裙
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