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月亮，我想对你说

娇娇
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Posted: 2008-11-19 02:47:01 Post subject: 月亮，我想对你说

月亮，我想对你说你动人的眼神早已被夜晚抢先注册成风景我只有站在沙滩的一个暗角通过大海提取你的心事你柔弱的线条踩疼了海有泪水落进涛声鳴咽在暗礁旁一些水草开始远离日子久了悲伤由动脉里枯萎既便如此却很难引申到另一种光明 2008.11.19 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-19 02:57:03 Post subject:

娇娇，我想对你说你动人的眼神早已被夜晚抢先注册成风景我只有站在沙滩的一个暗角通过大海提取你的心事你柔弱的线条使泪水落进涛声鳴咽在暗礁旁水草开始远离日子久了悲伤由动脉里枯萎既便如此却很难引申到另一种光明 1998.11.19 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-11-19 15:39:47 Post subject:

娇娇对你说。。。。。。。。。。。。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-11-19 16:13:53 Post subject:

早上好二位！握手！感谢！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-19 22:00:27 Post subject:

吉林人，诗里有吉林的风味 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2008-11-19 22:41:23 Post subject:

是啊，我是吉林四平的。不过，我并不能代表所有人。感谢金金的支持！祝好！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-20 00:48:20 Post subject:

你终于来啦！！！诗不错滴》欢迎。多支持，会有收获的。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-11-20 02:19:38 Post subject:

握手海军！真的很感谢！祝好！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2008-11-27 18:33:58 Post subject:

柔美, 感人. 问好娇娇.

娇娇
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Posted: 2008-11-28 01:14:07 Post subject:

嘿嘿，感谢白水！其实，我更喜欢你的诗歌！永远快乐！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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