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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2008-10-22 18:26:37 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

伤城 wrote:

捡起一叶残红又随手丢弃，任其
随风

问好“徐娘” Sad

哈, 等着, 等白水兄把哪天抽空把“徐娘”娶回来, 一定转告 Very Happy

好啊，等着你。不可你把徐娘娶走了，很多人要失恋 Very Happy

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那好吧, 我不娶了. 省得别人找麻烦 Wink

白水
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Posts: 14102
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Posted: 2008-10-22 18:36:17 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

其实，那把琴早已碎了
一片片从你胸腔吐出
我俯身
捡起一叶残红又随手丢弃，任其
随风

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冲浪, 海军. 真盼你们和其他诗友能有机会来TORONTO同游, 置身北美的原始森林会让你们产生许多联想,你们文笔好, 定能写出比我好得多的诗歌.
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白水邀请洛夫先生同游没有？最好能弄个野炊，有人弹瑟，琵琶，金竖琴，对酒歌怀，真是仙人的生活。不知道能不能放火，
一把火让美景化为灰烬。（明令禁止烧火）

太美的景是不能写的，一生只能看一次。写不出的，只有痛。我觉得还是呆在国内好，尽管很穷，很无趣，但有希望挣大钱。如果像白水能常见到大诗人，诗友，对自身的提高还是有好处的，呆在旁边能聆听一言半语都是无穷的动力。

有感问好白水。

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问好伤城. 看来我们也得回去才是 Very Happy

秀水
秀才

Joined: 31 May 2008
Posts: 221
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Posted: 2008-10-23 06:39:18 Post subject:

再赏.问候白水 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-10-23 11:43:34 Post subject:

古典韵味浓郁，秋辞凝聚！ _________________ 晴宝儿

上城
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Joined: 15 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-10-30 21:26:09 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

古典韵味浓郁，秋辞凝聚！

白水就娶这位晴宝儿得了。正好也像是位美女。我保证没有人
找你麻烦。加拿大和中国也不会发生战争 Very Happy

_________________
每个诗人都很重要

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2008-11-01 17:28:38 Post subject:

秋风萧萧、秋阳惨淡、枫叶零落、琴声弦断，白水描摹的是怎样的离人情景！

司马策风
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Posted: 2008-11-01 18:37:41 Post subject:

古今兼容！有味。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-11-02 00:45:00 Post subject:

那日立于枫林, 转身360度, 尽为林海. 他的广褒让人体会到博大精深胸怀, 秋风淡扫让人听到的是天籁之声, 而那萧萧落叶却好象破碎的瑶琴,,,,,,美极而致伤感, 伤感之余却让人更深的体会世间万象. 就好象满山彩枫, 生必有死, 而死孕育着生. 生生息息就这样周而复始. 人置身于大自然不过沧海一粟, 莫如随缘了... ... 感悟甚深,问候白水!

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-02 07:35:54 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

再赏.问候白水

谢谢鼓励,问好秀水

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-02 07:36:48 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

古典韵味浓郁，秋辞凝聚！

问好晴宝儿, 希望常读到你的诗歌

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-02 08:04:48 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

晴宝儿 wrote:

古典韵味浓郁，秋辞凝聚！

白水就娶这位晴宝儿得了。正好也像是位美女。我保证没有人
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伤城,看你的回帖就乐. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-02 08:06:30 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

秋风萧萧、秋阳惨淡、枫叶零落、琴声弦断，白水描摹的是怎样的离人情景！

问好月亮.

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-02 08:07:31 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

古今兼容！有味。

谢谢鼓励, 问好

白水
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Posts: 14102
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Posted: 2008-11-02 08:08:30 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

那日立于枫林, 转身360度, 尽为林海. 他的广褒让人体会到博大精深胸怀, 秋风淡扫让人听到的是天籁之声, 而那萧萧落叶却好象破碎的瑶琴,,,,,,美极而致伤感, 伤感之余却让人更深的体会世间万象. 就好象满山彩枫, 生必有死, 而死孕育着生. 生生息息就这样周而复始. 人置身于大自然不过沧海一粟, 莫如随缘了... ...
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谢谢理解, 问好荷梦

小城故事
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Joined: 03 Nov 2008
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Posted: 2008-11-03 20:45:14 Post subject:

是啊, 那天的确临时决定, 找了了茅屋住了一夜. 晚上在湖边拿着望远镜数星星, 看月亮.好美如过是我则另有感慨——孩子娶妻要钱......何美之有啊！问好楼主！ _________________ 没有国界的可望

娇娇
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Joined: 18 Nov 2008
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Posted: 2008-11-19 16:59:54 Post subject:

看望白水！欣赏佳作！喜欢！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

郭强
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Joined: 15 Nov 2008
Posts: 7

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Posted: 2008-11-21 20:40:15 Post subject:

把一弯微笑为你画在天上形象生动，欣赏问好。

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-11-25 23:53:39 Post subject:

捡起一叶残红又随手丢弃，任其随风随心，随意～～～喜欢！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-26 13:24:01 Post subject:

小城故事 wrote:

是啊, 那天的确临时决定, 找了了茅屋住了一夜. 晚上在湖边拿着望远镜数星星, 看月亮.好美

如过是我则另有感慨——孩子娶妻要钱......何美之有啊！

问好楼主！

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问好朔南, 相信你的孩子一定会成为自立自强的人, 别担太多心.

白水
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Posted: 2008-11-26 13:26:42 Post subject:

娇娇 wrote:

看望白水！欣赏佳作！喜欢！

问好娇娇, 不好意思, 最近电脑破天荒的给我找了一次大麻烦. 未能及时给朋友们回帖 Embarassed

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