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沈河,死与生相遇!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 04:39:31    Post subject: 沈河,死与生相遇! Reply with quote

沈河,死与生相遇!
诗/廖蕙琳(南京)

在你灵魂升空的过程
我与你这陌生的名字相遇
与你诗歌相遇
与不知道的人和事情相遇
与疾病相遇
与贫穷挣扎相遇

博客定格在哪页?
论坛回复的帖子定局在哪里?
时间停留在哪?

这错生的疾病
没有生路
此刻我拿着诗歌的尺子
处理
8厘米以下的
松木
为你加工
诗歌一样的新房

他们都走近棺材
为你入木三分
撑伞

2008-11-26 18:48 写于秦淮

沈河的博:http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_44f2ac51010009ir.html

福建诗人沈河先生因病医治无效,于2008年11月26日9:30去世,享年45岁。
读新闻惊闻沈河先生因病医治无效,为疾病无望诗人离去太早而惋惜!痛!

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笑后
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 04:39:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

《一堆口径8厘米的松木》
  诗/ 沈河

在木材加工厂门口,一堆小口径的松木
以及它们的叫喊
正在腐烂
厂内的锯声彻夜不停
是不是一种讥笑
在那里落下
围在这群松木的身边

根根松木,口径小,先是疑惑
而后变质
曾经是一株株树木
呈现在大山里

一把斧头也会走错方向
在暗灯瞎火
容易遮盖和掩护

加工厂老板手拿尺子
口径8厘米以上的松木进厂,8厘米以下的
就堆在那里

格式评析:树作为一种支撑性的物象,在沈河下沉般的诗写里,充分发挥了职业性的本能:平衡、结实、有力。《一堆口径8厘米的松木》这首诗本没有让人大惊小怪的因素,但就是因为有了一个8厘米的限定,而令一堆普通的松木变得触目惊心。“加工厂老板手拿尺子/口径8厘米以上的松木进厂,8厘米以下的/就堆在那里”。诗的最后一节不动声色而又入木三分,没有变形,没有隐喻,甚至取消了想象,有的仅仅是描述与记录,却不由自主地印证了罗布•葛利耶的那句名言:“世界并不无意义也并不有意义,它在着,如此而已。”其实,这就是诗的冷抒情,这就是诗的客观。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 05:17:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

哀悼!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-26 13:15:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好笑后, 这消息令人痛惜.
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PostPosted: 2008-11-27 20:04:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

顶。
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