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七绝—初冬
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-10-27 20:55:48    Post subject: 七绝—初冬 Reply with quote
夜雨深秋念旧音，晨风衣透述新琴。
闲吟往岁诗情浅，意绘今朝绛叶深。
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PostPosted: 2008-10-28 13:53:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪MM新诗自谦，MM诗情不浅。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-10-28 22:09:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
莹雪MM新诗自谦，MM诗情不浅。
谢谢qinghongGG点评和关注！我一定继续努力。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-13 17:46:20    Post subject: 七绝-初冬 Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
夜雨深秋念旧音，晨风衣透述新琴。
闲吟往岁诗情浅，意绘今朝绛叶深。

步莹雪《初冬》原玉

目送飞鸿响远音，清江幽梦托心琴。
霜风落木萧萧下，流霰催冬百感深。

(加拿大/闻山)
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-11-13 21:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
wenshan wrote:

步莹雪《初冬》原玉

目送飞鸿响远音，清江幽梦托心琴。
霜风落木萧萧下，流霰催冬百感深。

(加拿大/闻山)

《偶感》回和wenshan

晓雾浓稠别雁音，凉风入袖又闻琴。
娇枫落后归乡梦，悄菊残芳更色深。

(三燕故都/莹雪)
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PostPosted: 2008-11-14 07:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗好和!
各有千秋!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-11-14 14:33:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
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好诗好和!
各有千秋!
谢谢您的关注，问候您，时时开心快乐！！
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PostPosted: 2008-11-18 17:21:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
MM越写越好了 Very Happy
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-11-18 23:31:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
MM越写越好了 Very Happy
JJ我会继续努力的 Very Happy
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