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发生过
葛榛
童生


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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 04:33:30    Post subject: 发生过 Reply with quote

雪花儿,在昏黄的路灯下
游荡,悄悄地
害怕遇上什么似的

风在后面追着
流星一样地,密密麻麻
似夏日
胡同里的蚊子
在月下,编织数不清的
如也样的,空空

久久地
就像站在风中的那个男孩
思想者那样
等着什么
什么又会发生
曾经发生过什么

没有麦浪
它被大雁捎走了
没有油纸伞,它落在了
江南

只剩下了
北风
快乐地追逐
唱着一节一节的歌
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沙漠
秀才


Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 04:47:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻灵的诗歌。

如也样的,空空——有意思:)

等着什么
什么又会发生
曾经发生过什么——感觉这里有点绕口。

欢迎新朋友!
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Location: Madtown
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 06:27:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点缺少质感,不像是 “发生过“ Very Happy
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葛榛
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PostPosted: 2007-02-12 23:30:06    Post subject: 谢谢支持!常来作客。 Reply with quote

谢谢支持!常来作客。新年快乐!
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 00:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻灵
读来愉悦

欢迎葛榛
我们的诗风很相识

Very Happy
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葛榛
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 04:19:04    Post subject: 问好! Reply with quote

谢谢支持!共同进步,问好!
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