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我就是我
红袖添乱
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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 06:16:44    Post subject: 我就是我 Reply with quote

我在秒针上,是一双踏着轻风的红舞鞋
我在刀刃上,是一滴恋着寒光的凝血
我是满山特疯特疯地燃烧的杜鹃,烧了山,
又去烧你走过的小径
  
在你描述过的那些月色中
我是那以眼泪的温度灼痛你的星光
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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 06:41:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

我要找找我是哪个。。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 10:06:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是落尘里的光影,跟随每个微尘闪动。
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 10:18:05    Post subject: 500贴? Reply with quote

这是落尘第500贴,恭贺中奖!奖品有杜拜帆船饭店总统套房一个月免费住宿卷、阿拉斯加破冰之旅14日游、纽西兰牧场度假村一个月、法国酒庄城堡之旅一个月、埃及金字塔14日游等等~可惜了!班竹除外~西西

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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 10:28:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
我是落尘里的光影,跟随每个微尘闪动。


這句蠻好,既適合版主的聲音,也帶了點徐志摩味.
覺得可以再發揮下去; 果然, 能則擺脫徐的抒情, 換一條路. Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-11-11 21:08:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

秒针上的红鞋 刀刃上的凝血 满山燃烧的杜鹃 都应了一个红字 妙
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PostPosted: 2008-11-13 06:08:11    Post subject: 咦?偶地帖子怎么叠这儿了涅? Reply with quote

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这是落尘第500贴,恭贺中奖!奖品有杜拜帆船饭店总统套房一个月免费住宿卷、阿拉斯加破冰之旅14日游、纽西兰牧场度假村一个月、法国酒庄城堡之旅一个月、埃及金字塔14日游等等~可惜了!班竹除外~西西
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