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任真
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Joined: 27 Sep 2006
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任真Collection

Posted: 2007-02-11 20:09:12 Post subject: 离开

姥姥离开黄河入海口时卷铺盖到自己寿材里睡了一夜我从那天开始对死亡猜测第二天她就跟舅舅去了芜湖那是她唯一一次活着坐火车十四年后回来乘坐的是一个彩绘小盒一天我在荒原的值班房里闲坐看到阴沉的天空压向身边的大河突然决定今晚独自在这儿守夜是啊，熄灯吧！方圆十五公里没有一盏灯火大地很安静，大河很安静世界唏唏嗦嗦，开始下雪了吗 2007－2－12

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2007-02-11 20:13:41 Post subject:

是啊，熄灯吧！方圆十五公里没有一盏灯火如临其境世界唏唏嗦嗦，开始下雪了吗读到这里，忽然有些感动了 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2007-02-12 00:27:49 Post subject:

给人重感的诗歌，提议加精。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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Posted: 2007-02-12 06:41:13 Post subject:

万事俱备，如果能有点睛一笔就更好了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

任真
童生

Joined: 27 Sep 2006
Posts: 17

任真Collection

Posted: 2007-02-12 19:22:30 Post subject:

谢谢各位诗友的勉励欢迎访问守望黄河口 http://blog.poemlife.com/user1/renzhen/index.html _________________ 欢迎访问守望黄河口 http://blog.poemlife.com/user1/renzhen/index.html http://www.maplereview.org/weblog.php?w=22

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