曲元奇
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Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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 Posted: 2008-10-29 21:40:36 Post subject: 白菜诗 |
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我应该把诗写成
大白菜
新鲜的大白菜
水灵灵的绿叶
透明的白梆
形与色的神韵
既俗又雅
不酸不甜不苦不辣
大众口味
即使爱吃酸甜苦辣的人
又有谁不喜欢
一靑二白
菜之皇后 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2008-10-30 02:41:24 Post subject: |
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| 菜之皇后. |
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曲元奇
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Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-10-30 20:03:36 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢赵老师 |
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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| Posted: 2008-10-31 17:57:54 Post subject: |
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味道不错.就是感觉浅了些.
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曲元奇
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Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-10-31 21:34:37 Post subject: |
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| 我觉得也是这样 谢谢 |
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-11-02 07:27:04 Post subject: |
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今有元曲奇天下, 萝葡白菜也入诗
即使爱吃酸甜苦辣的人
又有谁不喜欢
一靑二白
感觉不错 |
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曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-11-02 21:40:51 Post subject: |
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| 白水老师 风趣 谢谢 |
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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| Posted: 2008-11-03 05:58:43 Post subject: |
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| 白菜最大众的菜品，如果能把诗歌做到清爽滴翠，大家都喜欢的份上应该是不错的好诗歌了~ |
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